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1、DescriptionFirstsomeReviewThinkbacktoourpreviouslessonsaboutwritingessays.Ingroupsof3-4writedownastepbystepprocesstowritinganessayincludingdifferentwritingsuggestions.Trytodothiswithoutlookingatyournotes.TrytokeepthetalkinEnglishWritingDescriptionsInthewindowwasafan.Theblad
2、esoftherustywindowfanclatteredandwhirledastheyblewoutastreamofwarm,soggyair.DescriptiveEssayGoalistoshareanexperiencewiththereaderappealingtotheirsenses.Howdoesthelastsentenceaboutthefanappealtothesenses?DescriptiveEssayMakereaderssee,taste,hear,smellandfeel.Givethereaderame
3、ntalpicture.Proessay-IntroImaginearestaurantwhereyoureverywhimiscateredto,youreverywantsatisfied,youreveryrequestgrantedwithouthesitation.Thepeopleonstafflivetopleaseyou.Theyhoveroveryouanxiouslyasyousampleyourselection,waitingforyourjudgment.Yourpleasureistheirdelight,yourd
4、issatisfactiontheirdismay.Lou’sisn’tthatkindofplace.Question-example1Doestheauthorhaveathesis?Canyoupicturethis‘perfectrestaurant’theauthordescribes?Proessay-Body1AtLou’sKosyKornerKoffeeShop,themockabuseflowslikeacupofspilledFolgers.Customersareyelledat,lectured,blamed,mocke
5、d,teased,andignored.Theypayfortheprivilegeofpouringtheirowncoffeeandscramblingtheirowneggs.Asinafondbutdysfunctionalfamily,Loudisplayshisaffectionthroughcriticismandinsults,andhiscustomersrespondinkind.IfLou’shadaslogan,itmightbe,“IfI’mpolitetoyou,askyourselfwhat’swrong.”Que
6、stion-body1Doestheparagraphsupportthethesis?DoyougetasenseofhowLoutreatshiscostumers?Proessay-example3“Maaaaakeeesomeonehappy…Make-make-maaakeeeesomeonehappy,”hecroonsasheliftsthesteamingpotthathasinfusedtheroomwiththericharomaoffreshlybrewedcoffee.Hecarriesittothewoman’stab
7、le,fillshercup,anddropstwosingle-servingcontainersofhalfandhalfnearby.Sight___Sound___Taste__Smell__Touch___Assignment#4EditsUnity-Askthequestion…Support-Ifyouseeaparagraphwiththreesentences…..Intro/Conclusion-ifyouseeaparagraphwithoneortwosentences…..Assignment-DescriptiveE
8、ssayWriteyourowndescriptiveessayusingaplacefamiliartoyou.alibrarystudyareaa