2022版高考英语一轮复习层级3第1讲添加合理的细节学案含解析外研版.doc

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1、高考层级三充实流畅的行文第1讲　添加合理的细节根据括号内的提示完成下列句子。1．However,itseemsthatpeoplearenotawareofthenegativeeffectsofmobilephonesonmunicationbetweenpeople.Forexample,moreandmorepeoplearenotpayingattentiontofacetofacemunication(比如，很多人越来越不重视面对面的交流)．2．Atthatmoment,Ibecamethefocu

2、softhewholeclassandIwasfullofgreatprideandconfidence(我充满了自豪和自信)．3．IsuggestthattheteacherselectproperEnglishfilmsforus,thusmakingEnglishlearningmoreinteresting(这样就使得我们的英语学习更加有趣)．4．Ifpossible(如果可能的话),I'lltakepartinsomesocialactivitiessothatIcanknowmoreaboutto

3、day'ssociety(以便我能更多地了解当今社会)．5．IalsohelpedchildrenintheneighborhoodwiththeirEnglishlessons.Tomyjoy,theymaderapidprogressandtheirparentsthoughthighlyofme(令我高兴的是，他们进步很快而且他们的父母对我评价很高)．6．Let'sdevelopgoodhabitsofsavingenergyinourdailylifeandtrytomakemorecontribut

4、ionstotheprotectionoftheenvironment(尽力为环境保护做出更多贡献)．在高考试题的书面表达的“注意”中明确要求：可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。适当添加细节的方法具体如下：1．列举具体的实例进行补充说明-4-/4高考①我要花一些时间和父母在一起。I'llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents.→I'llspendsometimestayingwithmyparents,chattingwiththembesidesdoingsomehousework

5、.②我看到了一些不良行为。Ifoundsomebadbehaviour.→Ifoundsomebadbehaviour.Somepeoplescribbledonthewall;someplayedonthelawnandsomethrewrubbisheverywhere.③我是一个充满活力的健康男孩，我非常喜欢体育运动。IamahealthyboyfullofenergyandIlikesportsverymuch.→IamahealthyboyfullofenergyandIlikesportsvery

6、much.WheneverIhavetime,I'llgohikingwithmyclassmates.2．增添相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容①过去我有时去村西的小河里游泳。Iwentswimmingintherivertothewestofthevillagenowandthen.→Weatherpermitting,Iwentswimmingintherivertothewestofthevillagenowandthen,inwhichthewaterwasveryclear.②旅行了一周

7、后，他回到了家。Afteraweek'strip,hereturnedhome.→Afteraweek'strip,hereturnedhome,tiredbuthappy.3．增添相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容①我需要好好休息，我要做些阅读。Ineedagoodrest.I'lldosomereading.→IneedagoodrestbecauseIdofeeltiredafterthehardworkofalltheseyears.I'lldosomereadingforfun,aswe

8、llasforknowledge.②慈善拍卖会募集的钱将送给急需的人。-4-/4高考Themoneycollectedatthecharitysalewillbesenttothoseingreatneed.→Themoneycollectedatthecharitysalewillbesenttothoseingreatneed.Thiswillnotonlyhelpthemoutofdiffic