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1、全国卷I:满分范文一满分文(一)DearPeter,Iamwritingtoaskwhetheryouareabletodomeafavor.SinceImquiteinterestedinEnglish,IwouldliketomakeanEnglishpenfriendtoimprovemywriting.Canyouintroduceonetome?Myidealpenfriendshouldbeofmyage,andaboywillbebetter.Aboywholikestravelingandfootballwillbea
2、goodcandidate.Inmyopinion,theguyofmyagewillsharealmostthesameexperiencesasmeanditiseasiertotalktoeachother.Wecanshareourfeelingsoftravelingandfootball.Ifpossible,Ihopethathelikespets.Hopeyoucanfindmeanidealpenfriend.Thankyou.Bestregards,LiHua名师点评:本文属于比较“平”的文章,即稳中求胜。文章没有华丽的词
3、语,但是使用了一些短语和结构,能够获得老师的欣赏。首句是个原因状语从句。文章也运用了定语从句来修饰boy,比较好。Ifpossible这个省略句则表明作者对这类状语从句的熟悉。积累卡片好词:1.candidaten.候选人2.sharewith与⋯分享好句:Inmyopinion,theguyofmyagewillsharealmostthesameexperiencesasmeanditiseasiertotalktoeachother.在我看来,像我这样年龄的男生和我会有更多的共同语言。好处:复杂句的组合很好。满分文(二)DearPete
4、r,Iamwritingtoaskwhetheryouareabletodomeafavor.IhavebeenlearningEnglishfortwoyearsandIhopetofindanEnglishpenfriendsothatIcangetmoreimprovement.Canyouhelpmetofindone?Idliketohaveaboy,whoisofmyageandisfondoftravelingandsports,tobemypenfriend.Inoftenhavesomethingtoexchange.Tha
5、tmyopinion,peopleofthesameageswhyIwanthimtobeofmyage.Ifhelikesdoggy,thatwouldbebetterbecauseIcantellhimsomethingaboutmylittledoggy.Idbeverythankfulifyoucanhelpme.Hopetohearfromyou!Bestregards,LiHua名师点评:从整体上来说,本文写得还是符合要求的,内容完整,要点和结构也很齐全。语言的使用不在于华丽的辞藻而在于其一些复杂句子的组织。最值得我们学习的就是
6、像好词和好句中列举的表达法。全文流畅而连贯,适合于模仿。积累卡片好词1.improvementn改进2.dosb.afavor帮助某人3.doggyn.小狗好句1.I’dliketohaveaboy,whoisofmyageandisfondoftravelingandsports,tobemypenfriend.我想寻找一个和我年纪相仿,喜欢旅游、体育的男孩来做我的笔友。好处:ofmyage年纪相仿;befondof喜欢。2.That’swhyIwanthimtobeofmyage,这就是为什么我希望笔友跟我年纪相仿的原因。好处:用why引
7、导的从句做表语从句。Shouldtouriststakephotoswithanimals?Koalasinwildlifeparkscan‘tfallasleepbecausetouristskeepdisturbingthem.Themovementisthinkingtomakethetourists’behaviourillegaltoprotecttheanimals.Whenpeoplearevisitingwildlifeparks,theyliketotakephotographswithanimals.Reasonsfort
8、hisarevaried.Somepeoplemaythinktakingphotoswithanimalsarefunnyincontrastwithtaking
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