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2、,hesawtheoldman'sstickandhadanidea.Hehadtiedthesticktothehandleoftheumbrellaandmadethemlonger.Nowwesharedtheumbrella.Peterwasveryhappy.2DearEditor,IliveinShenyangCity.Nearmyhomethereisthefamoustemple,whichwasbuiltinthelateMingDynasty.Onthewallsofthetempleismanypictur
3、es,whichshowushowpeopleatthattimelive.Thetempleisofgreatlyvalue.Iamworriedaboutitbecausesomeofthepicturesaredamagedbyairpollution,whichcomesfromhumanbeings.Hundredoftouristsvisitthetempleeveryday.Thecarbondioxidefromtheirbreathisdestroyedthepictures.Ithinkonewaytosol
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8、traveledtoParisonabus,Ibecameverysick.Awell-dressingmanonthebushelpedmegreatly.Hetookmeoffthebus,foundoutwherethedoctor’soffice,and
