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1、WritingTraining假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Alice听说中国的中小学正在实施素质教育,来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写封回信，谈一谈“素质教育”实施后你们学校生活发生的变化。应试教育素质教育上课：听讲，做笔记上课：课堂活跃，研究学习，能力培养，有时学生当老师课外活动：做不完的作业课外活动：开展各种类型的活动：唱歌跳舞，球类活动，电脑学习，英语角…晚上：继续做作业至深夜晚上：看新闻，做实验，各学科讨论注意：1、写信日期为2004年2月20日；2、词数：100左右；3、注意书信格式。DearAlice,Yousaidtha
2、tyouwantedtoknowsomethingaboutquality-orientededucation.SoIwilltalkaboutquality-orientedandexam-orientededucation.Atlast,weonlycouldlistenourteachersandmakenotes.Afterclasseswehadalothomeworkstodo.Ittookusmuchtimeonitatnight.Butnow,inclass,wecandiscussquestionswithteacher.St
3、udentsareallliketostudy.Sometimewealsocouldplayateacher.Wedon’thavesomanyhomeworks.Sowehaveenoughtimetodoallkindsofactivities,forexample,singing,playingballs,Englishconer,andsoon.Atnight,wecanseenews,doexperiments…Yours,LiHua2004,2,20Incorrectletterform;Spellingmistakes;Gram
4、maticalmistakes;Thepassageiswordy;ThinkinChineseandwriteinChinglish;NoeffectiveconjunctionsCommonproblems:DearAlice:Yours,Feb20,2004LiHuaIncorrectletterform,Spellingmistakes:Ourschoollifewasquiteboiling.Weonlymadenoticesandlessonedinclass.Alotofactiviststaketheplaceofthehome
5、work.Butnowthingsaredifficultfromit.Wedoexperiencesanddiscussionthesubjects.boringnoteslistenedactivitiesdifferentexperimentsdiscussInclass,exam-orientededucationmadeustolistentheteachersandmakenotesComparingwiththat,quality-orientededucationallowsuslearnlively.Wejusthadtoom
6、anyhomeworkstodo.Severalyearsago,wehavesawandexperiencedtheexam-orientededucation.GrammaticalmistakestoComparedtolearnactivelymuchhomeworkThepassageiswordyIreceivedyourlastletteryesterday.Iampleasedtoreceiveit.YousaidyouheardthatChinaiscarryingoutthequality-orientededucation
7、inprimaryschoolsandmiddleschoolsandyouwantedtoknowsomethingaboutit.SoIwilltellyousomethingaboutitandtheexam-orientededucation.(50words)Gladtohearfromyou.Youwanttoknowsomethingaboutthequality-orientededucationinChina.I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutthechangesinmyschool.27wordsW
8、riteinChinglishIntheevening,weseenews,doexperimentsanddiscussingsubjects…wh
