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1、时态：过去时,上周发生人称：第一人称OurSpringOutingLastThursday,wehadaclassmeetingtodiscusswheretogoforourspringouting.Wecameupwithseveralchoicessuchasgoingboating,climbingamountain,andgoingtoanamusementpark.Finally,wedecidedtogomountainclimbing.Thenextday,wesetoffearlyinthemor
2、ning.Whileclimbingthemountain,weenjoyedthewarmsunshineandabeautifulview.However,whenwereachedthetop,wewereshockedtoseelitterhereandthere,suchasbottlesandbananapeels.Thenwestartedtopickupthelitter.Afterwards,weputtherubbishintothenearbyrecyclingbinandnon-recycl
3、ingbinrespectively.Weweretiredbuthappy.(112字)边慧婷Ourclassintendedtogooutforspringouting.Wediscussedwheretogo.Somepreferredtogotoamusementpark;somefeltlikegoingboatingintheparkandotherswerewillingtoclimbthemountain.Intheend,wemadeupourmindtoclimbthemountain.Earl
4、yinthenextmorning,wesetouttoclimbthemountain.Thesunwasshiningandtheairwasfresh.Surroundedbythebeautifultreesandflowers,wewereallimpressedbythescenery.Aswegottothetopofthemountain,wewereexhausted.Buttooursurprise,therewereavarietyofwasteslyingontheground,suchas
5、theplasticcans,thefoodwastesandsoon.Thoughverytired,weallpickedupthewastesandputthemintoourbags.Whenwereachedthefootofthemountain,wefoundtwobins.Onewasintendedforrecycledwastesandtheotherwasfornon-recycledwastes.Sowesortedoutthewastesandthrewthemintothecorrect
6、bins.Aftereverythingwasfinished,wewerealltiredbutwethoughtitwasworthwhiletoprotecttheenvironment.(butoureffortsdidn’tprovetobeinvain.)Weshouldpaymoreattentiontoitandtakemeasurestoprotectit.Weallbelieveifwedosowewillhaveamorebeautifulenvironment.(228字)郝语I’mLiHu
7、astudyinginClass1Grade3.Lastweek,wediscussedabouttheplacesforspringouting.Thethreechoiceswereamusementpark,goingboatingandclimbingmountain.Eventually,wedecidedtoclimbmountain.Earlyinthemorning,wearrivedatXiangShanParktogether.Itwasasunnyday.Andthebeautifulscen
8、erysurroundingusseemedlikeapainting.Thetreesandflowerskeptusspellbound.Weenjoyedthefreshair.Onthetopofthemountain,wespottedavarietyofrubbish,suchasbananas,emptybottles,plasticbagsa
