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1、初二写作指导（记叙文写作指导）记叙文八大评分标准■1）覆盖全部要点■2）语法正确■3）结构合理■4）详略得当■5）过渡自然■6）丰富句式■7）高级词汇■8）合理想象全局■1）时态■2）文体■3）勾细节■4）分段■5）详略得当■重点突出细节■甘间，人物，地点■动作进行■人物心理■矛盾冲究时间■—天:onedBY，theotherdav/onedavlastFridav/aboutafortnightagoonce,manyyearsagoacoupleofminutesagointhespringof2010某年某月某天某小时某分■在201

2、0年9月2日8点半：■在2010年12月的一个寒冷早上：过渡时间:1)onone'sarrivaldeparture:2)assoonas.../when.../bvthetime.../after第二天：第二天一大早：3)withoutanydelay4)Then,soonafterwards5)Inthefollowingdays;oilthelastday动作(紧凑)1)IdidA?didBanddidC2)IcliclA,doingBandC3)IwasdoingA;ShewasdoiugBwhilehewasdoingC.som

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5、ecornsoffandpiledthemup.Ifeltitwasgreatfun.Onthelastday,wegatheredtogetherintheopenairtohaveaparty,wherewesangsongsanddancedhappily.■Thiswasreallyanunforgettableexperienceforusall.■LasttermwewenttoMiyuntoworkonthefarm.■Uponourarrival,weweredividedintogroupsoffourandeachgr

6、oupsharedoneroom.Allbyourselves,wewipedthewindows,sweptthefloorandmadethebed■（交代时间人物地点）Assoonaswefinishedthecleaning,wewalkedtothefruityardandhelpedthefarmerswiththeharvest.■（交代动作）Someofuswerepickingappleswithbaskets;Somewerecarryingthebaskets，whichisreallyastrenuoustaskf

7、orsomeofthegirls;Otherswerebusyloadingthetruckwiththeapples.■（交代矛盾心情）Fortunatelyenough,wefinishedalloftheworkbeforesunset■（交代心情）andmarchedhappilytoourdorm■（交代时间）ThenextmorningIgotupearly.Iwasveryhappybecauseitwasafineda%B、thetimeIgottothefield,thefarmershadalreadystartedt

8、heirharvest.■（动作进行）Withoutanydelay，wepickedupthetools,joinedthemandhelpedthemwiththecornharvest■