四六级写作精讲.ppt

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1、problemsinourwriting(1).结构：看不出清楚的三部分或三段(2).切题：没有按照三句提纲写作(3).表达：语言表达不清,支离破碎。Socialmanypeopledevelopnowatfullspeedthrowuponejobandtakeonanother.(?)中式英语Thestorymakemehavesomeideas.(?)Wehavenobodytodependoninthefuture.(?)Therehavemanypeople.(?)…tolivewit

2、houttheirparents.(?)Schoolisastudyplace.(?)moneysociety(?)socialman(?)realitystory(?)语法错误-词汇Nowdays/nowaday/Innowadays,…像likes(?)unlikedislikethetrue/beturephonomenonsphonomenathefting/thiefed/thievetheir’sboss/thierthechildrentheparentseffectourstud

3、yunusefulunindependentoverdegreewritterWastook/tooked/takedononehand…onanotherhand…firstly…theotherhand…Foronething…fortheotherthing…tocometruetheirdifferentaimMakethemdo/letthemdo(4).连贯性1.缺少连贯性。没有连接词2.连接词使用不当。如Therefore，However,Asaresult,etc.(5).其他1

4、.题目：缺失，字母大小写。2.文中出现省略号“……”和缩略语,如“Oct.”，“aren’t”，应用“etc.”,“andsoon”表达“等”。3.文中出现中文甚至空格，如“心理课程”，“”。4．主观表述，论据不充分，举例不具代表性，身边的事例。…should…5．字数过多，书写潦草，卷面不洁。范文分析AccidentsConcerningCampusSecurity1.目前校园安全事故常有发生2.这种现象造成的恶劣影响3.应该如何杜绝这种现象AccidentsConcerningCampusS

5、ecurity1.目前校园安全事故常有发生Itisanissuethataccidentsconcerningcampussecurity,whichhasshockedthepublicandsparkedaheateddiscussion,frequentlyoccurinsomeschools.2.这种现象造成的恶劣影响Thisphenomenoncanimposeaquitenegativeimpactontheindividualaswellasthewholesociety.Firs

6、tofall,thecruelscenehasmademanypassers-bypanic,nottomentiontheintensegriefsufferedbytherelativesoftheyoungvictims.Besides,thephenomenonwilldefinitelyposeathreattothestabilityandsecurityofthewholesociety.Moreover,Somepeopleevenlosetheirconfidenceinliv

7、ingasecureandhappylife.AccidentsConcerningCampusSecurity3.应该如何杜绝这种现象Frommypersonalperspective,severalcounter-measurescanbetaken.Foronething,relevantauthoritiesaretomakesurethatsomeequipmentsareavailableincaseofemergencies.Foranother,activitiesaretobe

8、launchedtoenhancethesafetyawarenessofthepupilsaswellastheirparents.Onlyinthiswaycanwefinallygetridofthiskindofphenomenon.WhatDoWeExpectfromaFriend?1.每个人都需要朋友2.不同的人对朋友有不同的期待和要求3.我的观点WhatDoWeExpectfromaFriend?1.每个人都需要朋友Everybodyneedsfriends.JustasAbrah