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四级作文新题型引语评论作文（2011年12月新题型）第一段：引语引用+简单评论（文章的第1、2句；引用题目中给予的原话，并对这句话的表层意思进行评论）文章第一句话：1）第一句的第一种写法：直接引用某位名人曾经说过的话"."sb.oncesaid."Givemesixhourstochopdownatree,andIwillspendthefirstfoursharpeningtheaxe."AbrahamLincolnoncesaid.[2011-12月CET6]2）第一句的第二种写法：直接引用某句平常人说的话"."Youmusthaveheardthesewordshundredsoftimesfromsb.…"Quittingsmokingistheeasiestthingintheworld,I’vedoneithundredsoftimes.”Youmusthaveheardthesewordshundredsoftimesprobablyfromyourfather,friendsorevenyourself.[2011-12月CET4]文章第二句话：对引语的表面含义进行评论(用自己的语言，解释和补充题目的引语)自由发挥，见真功夫Althoughfour-hourseemstobequitealongtime,itcanhelppeoplechopdownthetreemoresmoothlyandlesslaboriousintheresttwohours.[2011-12月CET6]Quittingsmokingissoeasyaslongaskeepawayfromcigarettes.However,manypeoplecanhardlyresistthetemptationofsmokingandthengiveuptheirattempttoquitsmoking.Itisobviousthatwithoutstrongwillanddeterminationnoonecanquitsmokingwithease.[2011-12月CET4]第二段：意义阐述段（文章的第3,4,5,6四句话，都写在第二段；这是字数最多，内容最丰满的一段，称为“猪肚”）文章第三句话：（点明引语的深层含义，从表面到深入，从局限到扩展;提炼出引语包含的中心词、主题词A）Thesaying/sentenceaimsatinformingusofthesignificanceofAinourpursuitofsuccess.Thesayingaimsatinformingusofthesignificanceofadequatepreparationinourpursuitofsuccess.[2011-12月CET6]Thesentenceaimsatinformingusofthesignificanceofastrongwillinourpursuitofsuccess.[2011-12月CET4]文章第四句话：(上句提出了引语的深层含义，那么从第四句开始就要说明这个事物的重要Thereisnodenyingthatwecan’temphasizetheimportanceofsth.toomuch.~fullpreparation.[2011-12月CET6]~astrongwill.[2011-12月CET4]文章第五句话：(论述这个事物的重要。建议用“短句+长句”（或者“主题句”+扩展句）的方式展开！)Sth.canhelppeopledo…Fullpreparationcanhelppeoplereducetheriskoffailure,aswecanadoptcounterplans(预备方案)whensomethingunexpectedoccurs.[2011-12月CET6]Astrongwillcanhelppeopleachievetheirgoalsmoresmoothly,asitcaninspire

1peopletoapproachchallengesandovercomedifficultieswithbravery.[2011-12月CET4]文章第六句话：(上采用论据进一步论述。论据可以是身边的事情，可以是国家社会热点，也可以是名人名事，运用固定的写作公式和考前背诵相关例子，这个很好写)模板句：QuiteafewexamplescanbegiventoprovetheimportanceofA,andIcanthinkofnobetterillustrationthanthefollowingone:举例公式：Howcouldsb.+插入语（解释sb.）+dosth.+状语+withoutsth.HowcouldBeethoven，agreatGermanmusiccomposerwhobecamedeafathisforties，composesomanyenduringsymphoniesandwinrespectandaffectionfromthewholeworldwithoutastrongwill.[2011-12月CET4]Howcouldyougetajobofferwithoutadequatepreparationbeforeaninterview?[2011-12月CET6]第三段：结合实际（文章的第7,8,9句；，针对第二段议论出某事物的价值和重要性后，这一段可以写一下在日常实践生活中，我们应该怎么做，理论联系实际，理论指导实际）文章第七句话：(再次强调某事物的重要性)Weshouldalwaysbearinmindthat[举例Awillexertafar-reachinginfluenceonourlife]~noonecanachievetheirgoalseasilywithoutpreparation.[2011-12月CET6]~insuchacompetitiveworldoftoday,amanwithoutastrongwillcanhardlysurviveletalonesucceed.[2011-12月CET4]文章第八句话：(我们具体应该怎么做？)Hence,whatwemustdoisto…Hence,whatwemustdoistocarryoutafullinvestigation,setupapropergoalanddrawupadetailedplanbeforewetakeactions.[2011-12月CET6]Hence,whenconfrontedwithdifficultiesandsetbacks,weneedtogritourteethandsticktothebelief/faiththatwherethereisawill,thereisaway.[2011-12月CET4]文章第九句话：(再次重申某事物的意义价值重要性，不过建议使用名人名言——名人有没有说过某个名言并不重要，重要的是，1)自己编的名言是可以的，但是不要写错了！2）名人的名字不要拼错，更不要写拼音！)"."sb.oncesaid."Preparationbreedssuccess."BenjaminFranklinoncesaid.[2011-12月CET6]“Astrongwillcanconquerallthings.”Churchilloncesaid.[2011-12月CET4]SuccessconsistsinA.NothingcanbemoreimportantthanAinourpursuitofsuccess.四六级写作引语评论作文人生哲理类，积极价值观话题论据论证素材1.合作（团结）的重要性Theimportanceofunity/cooperationSignificance：主题句：Cooperationcanhelppeopleachievetheirgoalsmoresmoothly.

2拓展句：Ifeveryoneinagroupcancooperatewitheachotherandplaytheirownstrength,thoseseeminglyunachievabletasksforonesinglepersoncanbesuccessfullyaccomplished/perfectlydonethroughcombinedefforts.举例：Afterthefinancialcrisissweptthewholeworldin2008,howcouldtheworldeconomyrecoveratsuchahighspeedwithoutcooperationamongcountriesallaroundtheworld?How:WeshouldAlwaysbearinmindthatinsuchacompetitiveworldoftoday,Noindividualsororganizationscanachievesuccesswithoutcooperation.Hence,weneedtofosterasenseofcooperationbyattendingvariousgroupactivities.“Comingtogetherisabeginning.Keepingtogetherisaprogress.Workingtogetherisasuccess.”HenryFordoncesaid.2.坚持和毅力的重要性Significance：主题句：Persistencecanhelpuscarveoutawaytosuccess.拓展句：Althoughthewaytosuccessisbumpy(崎岖的)andfullofinevitablesetbacks,itispersistencethatleadustothedestinationweareeagertoreach.举例：HowcouldThomasEdison，oneofthegreatestinventorsthroughoutthehistoryofmankindwhoexperiencednumerousunsuccessfulattempts,inventthefirstelectriclampwithoutpersistence?How:Weshouldalwaysbearinmindthatpersistenceplaysanindispensableroleinourpursuitofsuccess.Whencomingacrosssetbacksandhardships,weneedtogritourteethandsticktothefaiththatoureffortsandpersistencewillberewarding.“Greatworksareperformednotbystrength,butbyperseverance.”SamuelJohnsononcesaid.3.乐观和悲观心态(人生哲理)Significance:主题句Optimismcanhelppeopleachievetheirobjectivesmoresmoothly.拓展句Asitcaninspirepeopletoapproachchallengesandovercomedifficultieswithconfidenceandcourage.举例：HowcouldBeethoven，agreatGermanmusiccomposerwhobecamedeafathisforties，composesomanyenduring(经久不衰的)symphonies(works)andwinrespectandaffectionfromthewholeworldwithoutoptimism?How:Weshouldalwaysbearinmindthatoptimismwillexertafar-reachinginfluenceonourlife.Hence，whatwemustdoistocultivateanoptimisticmindsetandtryourutmosttoinfluencethosewhoarepessimistic.“Anoptimistseestherose;apessimistthethorn.”Aphilosopheroncesaid.4.谦虚的好处Significance:主题句Modestycaninspirepeopletoachievegreatersuccess.拓展句Thosewhoaremodestwillneverbecontentwiththeircurrentachievements,

3instead,theywillworkconstantlytoachieveahighertarget.举例：HowcouldBenjaminFranklin,whowasonceaprinterofhumbleorigins,attaintremendousachievementsinsomanyfieldssuchasscience,politics,literatureandnavigationifhewassimplycontentwithsmallachievements?How:Weshouldalwaysbearinmindthatmodestywillpromptustogofarther.Accordingly,atnotimeshouldwebesatisfiedwithoursmallaccomplishments,instead,weneedtokeepanopenmindtoacceptnewthings,absorbnewinformation,acquirenewknowledgeandseizenewopportunities.“Successconsistsinindustryandmodesty.”Aphilosopheroncesaid.5.梦想目标和理想的意义Significance:主题句Ourdreams/goals/ideals/objectiveswillkeepupfromgivingupeasilyespeciallywhenweareingreattrouble.拓展句Theywillleadustothedestinationweareeagertoreach,bringoutthebestinusandstimulateustoremainfirminourfaith.举例：HowcouldHelenKeller,adisabledwomanwhowasbornblindanddeaf,finallybeaworld-renownedwriterwhowroteIfIHadThreeDaystoSeewithoutanaimtoovercomeherphysicallimitation？How：Weshouldalwaysbearinmindthatobjectivesareofgreatimportanceinourpursuitofsuccess.Hence,wemustsetuppropergoalsbeforewestarttodoanythingandsticktoitwhateverdifficultieswemeet.“Oneofthemostdangerousformsofhumanerrorisforgettingwhatoneistryingtoachieve.”PaulNitzeoncesaid.6.创新精神creativespiritSignificance:主题句Creativespiritcanpromotetheadvancementofbothindividualsandsocietyasawhole.拓展句onlythosewhoareinnovativecanmakecontinuousprogressandmaintainacompetitiveedge.举例：HowcouldSteveJobs,ageniuswhochangedthewayofmoderncommunication,recreationandevenourlife,launchsomanypowerfulelectronicproductsconstantlywithoutcreativespirit?How:Weshouldalwaysbearinmindthatcreativespiritisofgreatsignificancetousall.Hence,weneedtodevelopahabitofdiscoveringnewthings，usingnewmethodsandapplyingnewthoughtsinourwork,studyorsimplyeverydaylife.“Innovationisthespiritofhumanbeing’sprogress.”Aphilosopheroncesaid.7.互助/爱心的重要性Significance:主题句Offeringhelpwillbenefitothersaswellasourselves.拓展句Itcouldnotonlybeabletobringconvenienceandbenefit

4toothers,butrealizeourownvaluesandobtainhappinessandsatisfaction.举例：HowcouldWenchuan,afterbeingseverelydamagedbytheearthquakein2008,rebuildtheirhomelandatsuchahighspeedwithouthelpfrompeopleallaroundtheworld?How:WeshouldalwaysbearinmindthathelpingothersisaessentialvirtuethateveryChinesecitizenshouldhave.Hence,weshouldnothesitatetohelpthosewhoareinneed."Presentrosetootherswithremainingfragranceathand.”Bacononcesaid.考前练习：8.自信的重要性confidence9.行动的重要性10.沟通的重要性·名人举例论证·名人名言警句引用论证·社会重大时事论证一、名人举例论证小虹语录：像坚强、毅力、乐观、目标、梦想等这样的人生哲理、个人素质是很多历史名人伟人大家所共有的，所以，为了减轻大家的背诵负担，特别精简了同学们最熟悉，也是阅卷者最亲切的一些名人史实作为举例。不在多，在精，有句话说的好“lessismore”少就是多！贝多芬Beethoven1770-1827,德国作曲家（keywords：乐观/毅力/意志/梦想）HowcouldBeethoven，agreatGermanmusiccomposerwhobecamedeafathisforties,composesomanyenduringsymphoniesandwinrespectandaffectionfromthewholeworldwithoutperseverance/astrongwill/optimism?德国伟大的作曲家，在他四十多岁的时候失聪，如果没有毅力/强大的意志力/乐观精神，他怎么可能创作出如此经久不衰的经典的交响乐，并赢得全世界的尊重和爱戴？爱迪生（ThomasEdison）1847－1931，美国发明家、企业家（keywords：坚持毅力克服困难）HowcouldThomasEdison，oneofthegreatestinventorsthroughoutthehistoryofmankindwhoexperiencednumerousunsuccessfulattempts,inventthefirstelectriclampwithoutpersistence？人类历史上最伟大的发明家托马斯.爱迪生，如果没有经历数千次失败的尝试后的坚持，怎么可能成功地制造出第一盏电灯？海伦凯勒（HelenKeller）1880-1968,盲聋女作家、教育家、慈善家、社会活动家（keywords：坚强意志梦想乐观）HowcouldHelenKeller,adisabledwomanwhowasbornblindanddeaf,finallybeaworld-renownedwriterwhowroteIfIHadThreeDaystoSeewithoutastrongwill/anoptimisticmindset/anobjectivetoovercomeherphysicallimitation?海伦凯勒，一个生来就盲聋的残疾女人，如果没有坚强的意志/乐观的心态/

5目标去克服她的身体极限，怎么可能成为创作出《加入给我三天的光明》这样的作品的世界知名的作家？牛顿(Newton)1642-1727,英国数学家,科学家,哲学家（keywords：谦虚/不自满，不骄傲）HowcouldNewton,oneofthemostinfluentialscientiststhroughoutthehistoryofmankind，discovertheLawofMomentumConservationifhewascontentwithhisachievementsoffindingThreeLawsofMotionandmadenofurthereffortsinscientificresearch?人类历史上最有影响的科学家之一牛顿，如果他只满足于发现了力学三定律而不再努力，他怎么可能会进而发现动能守恒定律？本杰明.富兰克林(BenjaminFranklin)1706-1790资本主义精神最完美的代表，十八世纪美国最伟大的科学家和发明家，著名的政治家、外交家、哲学家、文学家和航海家以及美国独立战争的伟大领袖（keywords：谦虚/不自满，不骄傲）HowcouldBenjaminFranklin,anonceprinterofhumbleorigins,attaintremendousachievementsinsomanyfieldssuchasscience,politics,literatureandnavigationifhewassimplycontentwithsmallachievements?出身卑微的印刷工本杰明.富兰克林，如果只满足取得的小小的成就，怎么可能在诸如科学、政治、文学和航海等这么多领域取得巨大的成就？史蒂夫.乔布斯(SteveJobs)1955-2011，发明家、企业家、美国苹果公司联合创办人（keywords：创新精神）HowcouldSteveJobs,ageniuswhochangedthewayofmoderncommunication,recreationandevenourlife,launchsomanypowerfulelectronicproductsconstantlywithoutacreativespirit？改变了现代通讯方式、娱乐方式甚至是我们的生活方式的天才史蒂夫.乔布斯，如果没有创新精神，怎么可能持续发布功能强大的产品？姚明（YaoMing）1980-，中国长城（keywords：自信）HowcouldYaoMing，anonceordinaryandunknownbasketballplayerinAsia,achieveunprecedentedsuccessinNBAWithoutconfidence?如果没有自信，曾经平庸无名的亚洲篮球运动员姚明，怎么可能在NBA取得前无古人的巨大成就？特蕾莎修女（MotherTeresaofCalcutt）1910-1997，慈善工作者，主要替穷人服务，1979年获诺贝尔和平奖（keywords：爱心）HowcouldMotherTeresa，whowasoncethepresidentofahighschool,quitherenviablejobanddedicateherwholelifetoservingthepoorwithoutsincereloveandphilanthropy?如果没有真挚的爱心和善心，特蕾莎修女，这个曾经的中学校长怎么可能会辞去令人羡慕的工作而将毕生奉献在为穷人服务上呢？常用名人名录：林肯AbrahamLincoln丘吉尔WinstonChurchill比尔.盖茨BillGates海明威Hemingway亚里士多德Aristotle拿破仑Napoleon爱因斯坦AlbertEinstein居里夫人MadameCurie华盛顿Washington培根Bacon莎士比亚Shakespeare马克•吐温MarkTwain毕加索Picasso

6二、社会重大时事论证小虹语录：有些论证，好像很难从名人身上下手，这个时候可以关注一下社会重大时事！南丁格尔（Nightingale）1820-1910，被誉为“提灯女神”，近代护理事业的创始人（keywords：帮助爱心）HowcouldNightingale,whowasbornwithblueblood,giveupherfavorablelivingconditionsanddedicateherwholelifetohelpingthosewhoareinjuredandinneedwithoutsincereloveandphilanthropy?如果没有真挚的爱心和善心，南丁格尔，出身名门的她怎么可能放弃优越的生活条件而将毕生奉献在帮助那些受伤的和有需要的人上呢？Thesuccessfulhostingofthe29thBeijing2008OlympicGamesshouldbeattributedtocooperationamongpeoplefromallwalksoflife.第29届北京奥运会的成功举办，应该归功于各行各业人们的通力合作。Forexample,afterthefinancialcrisissweptthewholeworldin2008,howcantheeconomyrecoveratsuchahighspeedwithoutthecooperationamongcountries?2008年金融危机席卷全球后，如果没有各个国家之间的通力合作，经济怎么可能以如此快的速度恢复？AnothercaseinpointisiPhone,researchedanddesignedinAmericawhileassembledrespectivelyinglobalfactoriesaroundtheworld.Withoutorderlyandefficientcooperationamongdifferentdepartments,howcaniPhonebefeaturedbyperfectfunctionsandtrust-worthyquality.(88words)另外一个例子是iPhone手机，她在美国研发设计，而在全世界的工厂里分别组装，如果没有不同部门之间有序而又高效的合作，iPhone怎么可能拥有完美的功能和令人信赖的品质的特点？HowcouldWenchuan,afterbeingseverelydamagedbytheearthquakein2008,rebuildtheirhomelandatsuchahighspeedwithoutlovefrompeopleathomeandabroad?如果没有国内外人们的爱心和帮助，受到2008年地震损害最大的汶川，怎么可能以如此快的速度重建家园？三、名人名言警句引用论证11类名人名言警句，常常放在段末句末，起到吸引阅卷者眼球，脱离一般写作俗套的功效，建议大家在考前多背一些常用的谚语俗语名人警句等！IDEAL理想/目标1.Don’tpartwithyourillusions.Whentheyaregoneyoumaystillexist,butyouhaveceasedtolive.(MarkTwain,Americanwriter)不要放弃你的幻想.当幻想没有了以后,你还可以生存,但是你虽生犹死.((美国作家马克吐温)2.Idealisthebeacon.Withoutideal,thereisnosecuredirection;withoutdirection,thereisnolife.(LeoTolstoy,Russianwriter)理想是指路明灯.没有理想,就没有坚定的方向;没有方向,就没有生活.(俄国作家托尔斯泰.L.)3.Ifwintercomes,canspringbefarbehind?(P.B.Shelley,Britishpoet)冬天来了,春天还会远吗?(英国诗人雪莱.P.B.)4.Livingwithoutanaimislikesailingwithoutacompass.AlexanderDumas(Davy

7deLaPailleterie,FrenchWriter)生活没有目标就像航海没有指南针.(法国作家大仲马.A.)5.Theidealswhichhavelightedmywayandtimeaftertimehavegivenmenewcouragetofacelifecheerfully.(AlbertEinstein,Americanscientist)有些理想曾为我们引过道路,并不断给我新的勇气以欣然面对人生.(美国科学家爱因斯坦.A.)6.Theimportantthinginlifeistohaveagreataim,andthedeterminationtoattainit.(JohanWolfgangvonGoethe,GermanPoetanddramatist)人生重要的事情就是确定一个伟大的目标,并决心实现它.(德国诗人,戏剧家歌德.J.M.)7.Theonlylimittoourrealizationoftomorrowwillbeourdoubtsoftoday.(FranklinRoosevelt,Americanpresident)实现明天理想的唯一障碍是今天的疑虑.(美国总统罗斯福.F.)STRUGGLE奋斗篇1.Geniusonlymeanshard-workingallone'slife.(Mendeleyev,RussianChemist)天才只意味着终身不懈的努力.(俄国化学家门捷列耶夫)2.Ihavenothingtoofferbutblood,toiltearsandsweat.(WinstonChurchill,BritishPolitician)我所能奉献的没有其它,只有热血,辛劳,眼泪与汗水.(英国政治家丘吉尔.W.)3.Patienceisbitter,butitsfruitissweet.(JeanJacquesRousseau,Frenchthinker)忍耐是痛苦的,但它的果实是甜蜜的.(法国思想家卢梭.J.J.)4.Progressistheactivityoftodayandtheassuranceoftomorrow.(Emerson,Americanthinker)进步是今天的活动,明天的保证.(美国思想家爱默生)5.Thereisnoroyalroadtoscience,andonlythosewhodonotdreadthefatiguingclimbofgainingitsnuminoussummits.(KarlMarx,Germanrevolutionary)在科学上没有平坦的大道,只有不畏劳苦沿着其崎岖之路攀登的人,才有希望达到它光辉的顶点.(德国革命家马克思.K.)6.Themanwhohasmadeuphismindtowinwillneversay"impossible".(BonaparteNapoleon,Frenchemperor)凡是决心取得胜利的人是从来不说"不可能的".(法国皇帝拿破仑.B.)7.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.(ThomasEdison,Americaninventor)有志者,事竟成.(美国发明家爱迪生.T.)SUCCESS成功篇1.Achievementprovidestheonlyrealpleasureinlife.(ThomasEdison,Americaninventor)有所成就是人生唯一的真正乐趣.(美国发明家爱迪生.T.)2.Ifyouwishtosucceed,youshouldusepersistenceasyourgoodfriend,experienceasyourreference,andprudenceasyourbrotherandhopeasyoursentry.(ThomasEdison,Americaninventor)如果你希望成功,当以恒心为良友,以经验为参谋,以谨慎为兄弟,以希望为哨兵.(美国发明家爱迪生.T.)3.Onlythosewhohavethepatiencetodosimplethingsperfectlyeveracquiretheskilltododifficultthingseasily.(FriedrichSchiller,GermanDramatistandpoet).只有有耐心圆满完成简单工作的人,才能够轻而易举地完成困难的事.(德国剧作家,诗人席勒.F.)

84.Successcoversamultitudeofblunders.(GeorgeBernardShaw,BritishDramatist)成功由大量的错误铸就.(英国剧作家肖伯纳.G.)5.Thepeoplewhogetoninthisworldarethepeoplewhogetupandlookforcircumstancestheywant,andiftheycannotfindthem.theymakethem.(GeorgeBernardShaw,Britishdramatist)在这个世界上,取得成功的人是那些努力寻找他们想要机会的人,如果找不到机会,他们就去创造机会.(英国剧作家肖伯纳.G.)6.Youhavetobelieveinyourself.That'sthesecretofsuccess.(CharlesChaplin,Americanactor)人必须相信自己,这是成功的秘诀.(美国演员卓别林.C.)TIME时间篇1.Doyoulovelife?Thendonotsquandertime;forthat'sthestuff5lifeismadeof.(BenjaminFranklin,Americanpresident)你热爱生命吗?那么,别浪费时间,因为生命是由时间组成的.(美国总统富兰克林.B.)2.Eachmomentinhistoryisafleetingtime,preciousandunique.(RichardNixon,Americanpresident)历史巨轮飞转,分分秒秒的时间都十分宝贵,也独具意义.(美国总统尼克松.R.)3.Iamaslowwalker,butIneverwalkbackwards.(AbrahamLincoln,Americanpresident)我走得很慢,但是我从来不会后退.(美国总统林肯.A.)4.Neverleavethatuntiltomorrow,whichyoucandotoday.(BenjaminFranklin,Americanpresident)今天的事不要拖到明天.(美国总统富兰克林.B.)5.Ordinarypeoplemerelythinkhowtheyshallspendtheirtime;amanoftalenttriestouseit.(ArthurSchopenhauer,Germanphilosopher)普通人只想到如何度过时间,有才能的人设法利用时间.(德国哲学家叔本华.A.)6.Thegoldenageisbeforeus,notbehindus.(MarkTwain,Americanwriter)黄金时代在我们面前而不在我们背后.(美国作家马克吐温)7.Thetimeoflifeisshort;tospendthatshortnessbasely,itwouldbetoolong.(WilliamShakespeare,Britishdramatist)人生苦短,若虚度年华,则短暂的人生就太长了.(英国剧作家莎士比亚.W.)8.Tochoosetimeistosavetime.(FrancisBacon,Britishphilosopher)合理安排时间就是节约时间.(英国哲学家培根.F.)9.Wealwayshavetimeenough,ifwewillbutuseitaright.(JohanWolfgangvonGoethe,Germanpoet)只要我们能善用时间,就永远不愁时间不够用.(德国诗人歌德.J.W.)WORK工作篇1.Itisnousedoingwhatyoulike;youhavegottolikewhatyoudo.(WinstonChurchill,Britishprimeminister)不能爱哪行才干哪行,要干哪行爱哪行.(美国首相丘吉尔.W.)2.Myphilosophyoflifeiswork.(ThomasAlvaEdison,Americaninventor)我的人生哲学就是工作.(美国发明家爱迪生.T.A.)3.Whenworkisapleasure,lifeisjoy!Whenworkisduty,lifeisslavery.(MaximGorky,Russianwriter)工作是一种乐趣时,生活是一种享受!工作是一种义务时,生活则是一种苦役.(俄国作家高尔基.M.)

94.Workbanishesthosethreegreatevils:boredom,vice,andpoverty.(Voltaire,Frenchphilosopher)工作撵跑三个魔鬼:无聊,堕落和贫穷.(法国哲学家伏尔基泰)STUDY学习篇1.Ifyoudon'tlearntothinkwhenyouareyoung,youmayneverlearn.(ThomasEdison,Americaninventor)如果你年轻时就没有学会思考,那么就永远学不会思考.(美国发明家爱迪生.T.)2.Naturalabilitiesarelikenaturalplantsthatneedpruningbystudy.(FrancisBacon,Britishphilosopher)天生的才干如同天生的植物一样,需要靠学习来修剪.(英国哲学家培根.F.)EDUCATION教育篇1.Betterbeunbornthanuntaught,forignoranceistherootofmisfortune.(Plato,AncientGreekphilosopher)与其不受教育,不如不生,因为无知是不幸的根源.(古希腊哲学家柏拉图)2.Geniuswithouteducationislikesilverinthemine.(BenjaminFranklin,Americanpresident)未受教育的天才,犹如矿中之银.(美国总统富兰克.B.)3.Therootsofeducationarebitter,butthefruitissweet.(Aristotle,AncientGreekphilosopher)教育的根是苦的,但其果实是甜的.(古希腊哲学家亚里士多德)KNOWLEDGE知识篇1.Activityistheonlyroadtoknowledge.(GeorgeBernardShaw,Britishdramatist)行动是通往知识的唯一道路.(英国剧作家肖伯纳.G.)2.Afreemanobtainsknowledgefrommanysources1besidesbooks.(ThomasJefferson,Americanpresident)一个自由的人除了从书本上获取知识外,还可以从许多别的来源获得知识.(美国总统杰斐逊.T.)3.AgreatparttotheinformationIhavewasacquiredbylookingupsomethingandfindingsomethingelseontheway.(AdamsFranklin,Americanhumorist)我的大部分知识都是这样获得的:在寻找某个资料时意外的发现了另外的资料.(美国幽默作家富兰克林.A.)4.Ifamanemptieshispurseintohishead,nomancantakeitawayfromhim,aninvestmentinknowledgealwayspaysthebestinterest.(BenjaminFranklin,Americanpresident)倾已所有追求知识,没有人能夺走它;向知识投资,收益最佳.(美国总统富兰克林.B.)WEALTH财富篇1.Allthesplendorintheworldisnotworthagoodfriend.(Voltaire,Frenchthinker)人世间所有的荣华富贵不如一个好朋友.(法国思想家伏尔泰)2.IfyourRichesareyours,whydon'tyoutakethemwithyoutotheotherworld?(BenjaminFranklin,Americanpresident)如果财富是你的,那么你为什么不把它们和你一起带到另一个世界去呢?(美国总统富兰克林.B.)3.Moneyisagoodservantandabadmaster.(FrancisBacon,Britishphilosopher)金钱是善仆,也是恶主.(英国哲学家培根.F.)4.Moneyislikemuck,notgoodexceptitbespread.(FrancisBacon,Britishphilosopher)金钱好比粪肥,只有撒到在大地才是有用之物.(英国哲学家培根.F.)5.Nocountry,howeverrich,canaffordthewasteofitshumanresources.(FranklinRoosevelt,Americanpresident)任何一个国家,不管它多么富裕,都浪费不起人力资源.(美国总统罗斯富.F.)

106.Sometimesonepaysmostforthethingsonegetsfornothing.(AlbertEinstein,Americanscientist)有时候一个人为不花钱得到的东西付出的代价最高.(美国科学家爱因斯坦.)HAPPINESS幸福篇1.Happinessisformcourage.(H.Jackson,Britishwriter)幸福是勇气的一种形式.(英国作家杰克逊.H.)2.Happyisthemanwhoislivingbyhishobby.(G.BernardShaw,Britishdramatist)醉心于某种癖好的人是幸福的.(英国剧作家肖伯纳.G.)3.Happinessliesnotinthemerepossessionofmoney;itliesinthejoyofachievement,inthethrillofcreativeeffort.(FranklinRoosevelt,Americanpresident)幸福不在于拥有金钱,而在于获得成就时的喜悦以及产生创造力的激情.(美国总统罗斯福.F.)4.Thesupremehappinessoflifeistheconvictionthatweareloved.(VictorHugo,Frenchnovelist)生活中最大的幸福是坚信有人爱我们.(法国小说家雨果.V.)5.Wehavenomorerighttoconsumehappinesswithoutproducingitthantoconsumewealthwithoutproducingit.(GeorgeBernardShaw,Britishdramatist)正像我们无权只享受财富而不创造财富一样,我们也无权只享受幸福而不创造幸福.(英国剧作家肖伯纳.G.)HEALTH健康篇1.Alightheartliveslong.(WilliamShakespeare,Britishdramatist)豁达者长寿.(英国剧作家莎士比亚.W.)2.Earlytobedandearlytorise,makesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.(BenjaminFranklin,Americanpresident)早睡早起会使人健康,富有和聪明.(美国总统富兰克林.B.)3.Sloth,likerust,consumesfasterthanlaborwears.(BenjaminFranklin,Americanpresident)懒惰像生锈一样,比操劳更能消耗身体.(美国总统富兰克林.B.)4.Thefirstwealthishealth.(RalphWaldoEmerson,Americanthinker)健康是人生第一财富.(美国思想家爱默生.R.W.)Cooperation合作篇Teamworkdividesthetaskandmultipliesthesuccess.~AbrahamLincoln林肯合作可以分配任务，增加成功Manyhandsmakelightwork.~JohnHeywood约翰.海伍德-众人拾柴火焰高Sticksinabundleareunbreakable.~KenyanProverb肯尼亚谚语绑在一起的棍子牢不可破Comingtogetherisabeginning.Keepingtogetherisprogress.Workingtogetherissuccess.~HenryFord亨利.福特Noneofusisassmartasallofus.~WinstonChurchill丘吉尔–三个臭皮匠，顶个诸葛亮Teamworkistheabilitytoworktogethertowardacommonvision.Theabilitytodirectindividualaccomplishmenttowardorganizationalobjectives.Itisthefuelthatallowscommonpeopletoattainuncommonresults.~AndrewCarnegie安德鲁.卡耐基合作是一种大家朝共同的远

11景努力地能力，一种将个人成就化身与团队目标的能力，她是一种成功的燃料，使平凡人取得不平凡的成就。Regardlessofdifferences,westriveshouldertoshoulder...Teamworkcanbesummedupinfiveshortwords:"Webelieveineachother."~MartinLutherKing马丁路德金不管我们之间的差异和不同，我们并肩努力。合作可以用五个字来总结：“我们互相信任”AsnowflakeisoneofGod'smostfragilecreations,butlookwhattheycandowhentheysticktogether!~AlbertEinstein爱因斯坦一片雪花是上帝脆弱的作品，但是看看这些雪花在一起的时候，他们的成就！Inunionthereisstrength.~Aesop伊索团结就是力量Rememberupontheconductofeachdependsthefateofall.记住，我们每个人的行为，决定了所有人的命运~AlexandertheGreat亚历山大大帝模板二对立观点作文第一段：陈述现状段（文章的第1、2句；主要用来写当前的某个社会现状、趋势；共有5种开篇写法，没有固定的标准选哪种，选择一种容易下手的去写，我已经将相关话题都举出来了）文章第一句话：1）第一句的第一种写法：就某事，人们又热烈讨论Thereisaheateddiscussionaboutwhetheritisnecessaryforsb.todosth（用在选择性话题：是否年级小出国，是否有必要参加…）forstudentstospendsomuchtimeinpursuingvariouskindsofcertificates.(花时间考证)HSK2）第一句的第二种写法：某事引发人们关注（不用写事情的经过，用一个词儿代替事情过程）Recently，theproblemof“”hasarousedwideconcernamongthepublicCurrently，hephenomenonofdrunkendrivinghasarousewideconcernamongthepublic（酒后驾驶）Currently，thefrequentjob-hoppingofgraduateshasarousedwideconcernamongthepublic.（跳槽）Currently，theproblemof“foodsafety”hasarousedwideconcernamongthepublic.（食品安全）（“”中填进的词有：nudepicturescandal艳照门丑闻；watershortage缺水；onlineeducation网络教育；fakediplomas假证书；crazefortalentshows选秀狂热）3）第一句的第三种写法：社会趋势（一般都写在“有越来越多的人干什么去了”这样的社会现状）Thereisagrowingtendencynowadaysthatpeopleinmountingnumbersareshowinggreatenthusiasmfor…lotterytickets/volunteerworks/varioustalentshows文章第二句话：（陈述正反观点；你只要说，针对某个事情，人们看法存在不一样就行，不要再第一段就开始具体论述双方的观点各是什么！）

12Doesanyoneholdthesameattitudetowardsthisissue？Definitelynot，actually，opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.第二段：对立观点论述段（文章的第3,4,5,6四句话，都写在第二段；这是字数最多，内容最丰满的一段）文章第三句话：（提出正方观点，比如说他支持什么；总体来说，有两种表示支持的说法）Somemaintainthat(表示“认为”的单词，打死都不写“think”；maintain/argue/hold/claim都可以写)1)某物是有好处的：AisbeneficialtoB.（练习：跳槽对学生有利）2)某物优点>缺点：Themeritsofsth.faroutweighitsdemerits.（练习：用手机的优点>缺点）文章第四句话：(上句提出了论点，这句就必须要用论据来证明，论据可以写一个，也可若干个；个数的标准是字数达标)Firstly,…secondly,…lastbutnotleast,….（万能理由：这个只能在新东方小虹的六级写作课堂听啦！）文章第五句话：(既是正反对立观点作文，第三句提出正方观点，那么这句当然要提出对立观点啦!)However，quiteafewpeopleholdtheoppositeopinionthat（反方观点），1)某物是有坏处：AisdetrimentaltoB.(练习：手机对孩子有害)2)某物缺点>优点：Thedemeritsofsth.faroutweighitsmerits.（merits代替advantages）文章第六句话：(上句提出了论点，这句就必须要用论据来证明，论据可以写一个，也可若干个；个数的标准是字数达标)Foronething，…foranother,…第三段：个人观点段（文章的第7,8,9句；四六级作文，包括考研作文，都要求写essay-议论文，短评，所以，写了上述对立观点的目的，其实就是为了最后提出自己的观点！）文章第七句话：Formypart，Iammoreinclinedtoagreewithformer/lateropinion.文章第八句话：(上句提出了论点，这句就必须要用论据来证明，论据可以写一个，也可若干个；个数的标准是字数达标)Inthefirstplace，…inthesecondplace,…（万能理由）文章第九句话：(再次重申自己的观点，和第七句话正好构成“总分总结构”)GivenallthefactorsIhaveoutlined，Istronglycommittothenotionthat…（观点句）考研、四六级写作利弊分析便利ConvenienceFor:Sth.(creditcards/privatecars)willofferusgreatconvenienceinmanyaspectsofourlife.Onlineeducationenablesthosewhodon’thavetimetostudyatschooltoacquireknowledgeconveniently.Microblogenablespeopletoexpresstheiremotionsandsharetheirexperiences

13convenientlyonthenet.Socialnetworkingsiteenablespeopletomakefriendswhosharethecommoninterests.Against:Sth.willbringabouttremendousinconvenienceinmanyaspectsofourlife.节约浪费saveandwasteFor:Sth.enablespeopletosaveagreatdealoftime./alargeamountofmoney.Second-handgoodsenablethosewhohavelowfinancialconditionstosavealargeamountofmoney.Livingoncampusenablesstudentstosaveagreatdealoftimeonthewaybetweenhomeandschool.Against:Sth.isnothingbutawasteofourlimitedandprecioustime.Beingaddictedtothesocialnetworkingsitesisnothingbutawasteofourlimitedandprecioustime.效率EfficiencyFor:Sth.canenhanceourstudy/workefficiencymanytimes.Against:Sth.willdecreaseourstudy/workefficiencymanytimes.环境EnvironmentFor:Sth.isconducivetotheimprovementofenvironment.Against:Sth.hasadetrimentalimpactontheenvironment.经济economyFor:Itisconducivetothesustainable/rapidandsounddevelopmentofeconomy.Part-timejobsenablestudentstoalleviatetheirfamilyfinancialburden.Against:Sth.hasadetrimentalimpactonthesustainable/rapidandsounddevelopmentofeconomy.文化CultureFor:Itisconducivetothedevelopmentandprosperityofculture.Against:Ithasadetrimentalimpactonthedevelopmentandprosperityofculture.个人素质培养personalqualitiesFor:Itcanhelppeoplefostertheconsciousnessofindependence/cooperationAgainst:Itisunfavorabletotheformationoftheconsciousnessofindependence/~个人健康BodyHealth

14For:Takingexerciseregularlycanhelppeoplebuildupresistancetodisease.Against:Stayinguplatewillimpairourhealthbothphysicallyandmentally.对个人产生的影响InfluenceFor:Sth.willexertafar-reachinginfluenceonone’s…Against:Sth.willexertanegative/detrimentalinfluenceonone’s…社会能力的培养socialcapabilitiesFor:Sth.(part-timejobs/extracurricularactivities)enablestudentstoenhancetheirsocialcapabilities/communicationcapabilities/practicalcapabilities/interpersonalcapabilities.Sth.enablestudentstoacquireawealthofexperiencewhichcannotbegainedfromthetextbooks.Properpressurecanbringpeople’spotentialintofullplay.Highereducationwillputstudentsinacompetitivepositionintheemploymentmarket.(themoreeducationyoureceive,themorelikelyyouaretoholdanadvantageintheemploymentmarket.)Travelingcanenrichourknowledgeandexpandourhorizons.Against:Itisunfavorabletotheimprovementoftheirsocialcapabilities.模板三问题解决作文（全文写3段共9句话；第一段提出问题，第二段分析问题，第三段解决问题）第一段：陈述现状段（文章的第1、2句；主要用来写当前的某个社会现状、趋势）文章第一句话：同“对立观点作文”模板的第一段第一句文章第二句话：举例或者具体描述（将文章第一句话所讲的抽象的、大体的社会现象，用具体的文字描述一下，增加字数，只能这么做了！）举例：Takingalookaround,wecanfindnumerousexampleswithease.具体描述：（第一句）Nowadays,thephenomenonofdrunkendrivinghasarousewideconcernamongthepublic.（第二句）Especiallytheyounggenerationlivinginmetropolis,tendtodriveafterdrinking,ignoringthefactthatthisbehaviormayposeunderlyingthreattotheirpreciouslifeandmayevenendangerothers.第二段：原因或危害陈述段（分析问题）文章第三句话：（过渡句，引发讨论某个社会问题、现象产生的原因）Amplereasonscanaccountforthisphenomenon，andthefollowingsmightbethemostcriticalones:文章第四句话：（提出某个社会问题、现象产生的原因；具体写几个原因，根据字数情况斟酌）Firstly，…secondly,….（万能理由）

15文章第五句话：（提出如果我们不关注这个问题，后果很严重！）Theproblemmentionedabovewillbeboundtogeneratesevereconsequencesifwekeepturningablindeyeanddeafeartoit.（翻译：如果我们对这个问题视而不见，听而不闻，将产生严重后果）文章第六句话：（危害和后果分别是什么呢？）Ontheonehand,ontheotherhand…第三段：提出建设性意见（解决问题）文章第七句话：（号召句，“放空话”！号召大家赶紧采取措施，投入关注等等）Inviewoftheseriousnessoftheproblem,effectivemeasuresmustbeadoptedbeforethingsgetworse.文章第八句话：（采取什么措施呢？这个在考前你都可以背下来，考试的时候用上去就好！）Firstandforemost，（措施）.1）扬善去恶：（两面性问题，比如手机，彩票等等）Whatweshoulddoistoencouragethemeritsandeliminatethedrawbacksof…（socialnetworkingsites）2)大家联合起来：（一般用在解决学生的问题，心理健康啊，网瘾啊等等）Itishightimethatallparents，educators，andtheauthoritiesshouldmakecombinedeffortstoputanendtothissituation.3)个人意识：（提高环境保护的意识等等）Thepublicshouldenhancetheirconsciousnessof…(safedriving)4)加强教育：（一般用在涉及面比较广的社会问题）Alarge-scalepubliceducationcampaignshouldbelaunchedtoinformthepublicoftheimportanceof…5)政府出台：（一般用在比较大的，比较严重的社会问题，如节约问题，浪费问题等等）Theauthoritiesshouldworkoutandimplementrelevantlawsandregulationstoimposeaheavypenaltyonthosewho(contaminatetheenvironmentdeliberately)6)呼吁相关部门加强监管：（一般用在比较大的，比较严重的社会问题。如质量问题，假冒产品问题）Therelevantadministrationdepartmentsshouldsparenoeffortstostrengthensupervisionon/over…文章第九句话：（采取了措施之后，当然要有美好的远景啊！）1)只有采取措施，我们才能：Onlywiththesemeasuresadoptedcanweputanendtothisproblem/cantheproblemof…bethingsofthepast..（结束这个问题）2)我坚信…Iamdeeplyconvincedthatahappyandbrilliantfutureisawaitingusif/aslongaswemakeeveryeffortto…Itisdeeply-rootedinmymindthattheworldwillbeamoreharmoniousplaceforustolivein.四六级话题现象作文论据素材

16资源短缺[缺水缺电等]Causes：1.Theever-increasingpopulationisaleadingcauseofwatershortage.Aspopulationsincrease,thedemandforwatergrowsaccordingly.2.Peopleeverywherewastewaterwithoutevenrealizingit.3.Theindustrialproductionwillcausewatercontaminationanditwillalsodecreasetheexistingwaterresourcesfurthermore.Harms:1.Watershortagewillgiverisegreatinconvenience2.Ithasadetrimentalimpactonthesustainabledevelopmentofeconomy.Measures:1.Theauthoritiesshouldworkoutandimplementrelevantlawsandregulationstoimposeaheavypenaltyonthosewhowasteorcontaminatewasterdeliberately.2.Alarge-scaleeducationcampaignshouldbelaunchedtoinformthepublicofthesignificanceofeconomizingonwater.3.Onlywiththesemeasuresadoptedcantheproblemofwatershortagebethingsofthepast.酒后驾车问题Causes：1.Theabsenceoftheconsciousnessofdrivingsecuritymaybeoneoftheleadingcauses.Thosewhodriveafterdrinkingoverlookthefactthattheirbehaviorsmaynotonlythreatenthesafetyofthemselves,butalsoofpassengersandpedestrians.2.Secondly,relevantlawsandregulationsmaynothavebeenstrictlyenforcedtowarnpeoplenottodriveafterdrinking.Measures：1.Relevantlawsandregulationsshouldbemadeandimplementedtoimposeaheavypenaltyonthosewhodriveafterdrinking.2.Secondly,amoreextensiveeducationcampaignshouldbelaunchedtoarousethepublic’sconsciousnessoftheimportanceofdrivingsafety.3.OnlyWiththesemeasureadoptedcantheproblemofdrunkendrivingbethingsofthepast.产品质量下降问题Causes：1.Inthefirstplace，Quiteafewbusinessmenputtheeconomicinterestsinthefirstplacewhileoverlooktheimportanceofqualityandsafety.2.Additionally，Inordertoreducecosts，theytendtouseinferiormaterials，simplifyytheproductionprocessandshortenthemanufacturingtime.)3.Lastbutnotleast，theabsenceofstrictsupervisionandseverepunishmentonthosewhoproducelowqualityproductshasalsoreinforcedthetrend.Measures：1.Firstly，relevantadministrationdepartmentsshouldsparenoeffortstostrengthensupervisiononthemanufacturingprocess.2.Secondly，relevantlawsandregulationsshouldbemadeandimplementedtoimposeaheavypenaltyonthosewhomanufacturefakeandinferiorproducts.

173.Onlyinthiswaycanweguaranteethequalityofproductsandtheinterestsofconsumers/people’ssafety.物价过高Highprices(民生问题，映射楼价政策等)Causes：1.Foronething，Greedislargelytoblame,mostcompaniesandmanufacturingunitsraisepricestorakeinexcessiveprofitsattheexpenseofcustomers’interests.2.Foranother，Thereductionofsubsidiesfromthegovernmenthasforcedcompaniesandmanufacturingunitstodependlargelyonhighprices.Itisobviousthatwithoutremarkableincreaseingovernmentsupport,theywillcontinuetoregardcustomersastheirprimarysourceofrevenue.How：1.Foronething，Relevantadministrationdepartmentsshouldsparenoeffortstostrengthensupervisiononpricesofbasiccommodities.2.Foranother，Theauthoritiesshouldincreasesubsidiesforcertaincompaniestoencouragethemtolowertheirprices.3.Onlywiththesemeasuresadoptedcanweensureahealthiermarketandenablethosewhohavelowfinancialconditionstoaffordtobuybasicgoods.（62words）商品过度包装Causes：1.Inordertoearnmoreeconomicgains,aconsiderablenumberofmanufacturesusuallywraptheirproductswithunnecessarybutappealingmaterialsaimingatattractingcustomer’sattention,arousingtheircuriosityandthenstimulatingtheirpurchasingdesire.2.Ontheotherhand,quiteafewcustomersbelievethatthemoredelicatethepackageseems，thesuperiorthequalitywillbe,thenotionhasalsoreinforcedthetrendofexcessivepackaging.Harms：However,theemergenceofexcessivepackagehasgivenrisetomanyundesirableconsequencesthatcan’tbeneglected.1.Foronething，itisawasteofpreciousandlimitednaturalresources，whichwillthusposeunderlyingthreattoouroffspringgeneration.2.Foranother,customersareoftendeceivedbyartificialexternalpackingratherthanbeingprovidedwithhigh-qualitygoods.Measures：1.First,lawsmustbemadeandimplementedtoimposerestrictiononexcessivepackaging.2.Second,apubliceducationcampaignshouldbelaunchedtoarousecustomers'consciousnessthatpackagingdoesn'tequaltoquality.3.Onlyinthiswaycanweputanendtothistrend.信任缺失问题Causes：1.Foronethings，Ahostofdishonestbehaviorsinthesocietyhavecauseddistrustbetweenpeople.2.Additionally,theabsenceofdeepcommunicationisalsoresponsibleforthegradual

18lossoftrustbetweenpeople.Insuchacompetitiveworldoftoday,enormouspressureandthefast-pacedwayoflifehasalsodeprivedpeopleoftheirchanceofin-depthcommunication.Measures:1.Firstly,Alarge-scaleeducationcampaignshouldbelaunchedtoinformthepublicoftheimportanceoftrustbetweeneachother.2.Secondly,weourselvesshouldspendmoretimecommunicatingwithpeoplearoundus.Thus,relationshipsandtrustbetweenpeoplecanbeenhancedsimultaneously.3.Onlyinthiswaycanweliveinamoreharmoniousworld.剽窃问题Causes：1.Tostartwith，Plagiarizingothers’worksseemstobeashortcuttotheacademicsuccess.Quiteafewpeoplepursuefameandgain，theyhavealong-cherisheddreamofachievingacademicsuccessovernight./Easilywithoutperspiration.2.Moreover,theabsenceofrigorousreviewonthebookstobepublishedhasalsoreinforcedthetrend.Measures:1.Firstly,relevantadministrationdepartmentsshouldimposeheavypenaltyonthosewhocommitplagiarism.2.Additionally，academicsshouldalsobearinmindthatthebestwayleadtothesuccessofacademicsishonesty.3.Onlyinthiswaycanwebuildapositiveandhealthacademicatmosphere.假文凭现象Causes：1.It’squiteeasytobuyafakediploma.2.Confrontedwiththeintensecompetitionintheemploymentmarket，mostpeopleseektoleaveontheemployersanimpressionofhigheducationbackgroundsandthenimprovetheirchanceofbeingemployedthroughfakediplomas.Harms:1.Fakediplomasdisturbthenormalorderofjobmarketsanddogreatharmtosociety.2.Employersmayrecruitemployeeswhoarenotqualifiedforacertainpost,causingagreatlosstotheircompanies.3.It’sunfairthatonefailstogethisjobjustbecausehisrivalhasafakediplomaorcertificate.Measures：1.Companiesanduniversitiesshouldhaveaclosecontactsothatthefakediplomascannotplaytricks2.Theonewhofabricatesthefakediplomasshouldbeseverelypunishedbylawstowarnthosewhohaveintensionofdoingso.网络谣言传播Causes：1.Foronething，theadvancednetworktechnologyhasprovidedpeoplewithsuch

19convenientcommunicationtoolsasBBS,Micrologs,QQ,ande-mail,whichwillpromotethespread/diffusionofrumors.2.Moreover,theconvenienceofanonymityonthenetenablesuserstoshirkresponsibilityfortheirremarks,whichhasalsoreinforcedthistrend.(52words)Measures：1.Firstly,theauthoritiesshouldmakeandimplementrelevantlawsandregulationstoimposeheavypenaltyonthosewhospreadrumorsthroughtheInternet.2.Secondly,relevantdepartmentsshouldstrengthenthesupervisionofthenetworkinformationandstopthecirculationofrumors.3.Lastbutnotleast,asfortheNetizenthemselves，neithershouldtheybelievetherumorseasily，nordisseminaterumorsdeliberately.Asthecommonsayinggoes,‘rumorsstopatthewise.’社会公德、爱心缺失Causes:1.Fromthemacropointofview,quiteafewpeopletendtoconcentratemoretimeandenergyonthepursuitofeconomicbenefitsandsatisfactionofmaterialswhileoverlookthesignificanceofsocialmorality.2.Fromthemicropointofview,someworrythattheirmorality,whichcanbebestexpressedthroughkindnessandwarm-heartedbehaviors,mayinviteunnecessarytrouble.Measures：1.Inthefirstplace,alarge-scaleeducationcampaignshouldbelaunchedtoinformthepublicofthesignificanceofsocialmorality2.Inthesecondplace,relevantlawsandregulationsshouldbemadeandimplementedtoprotectthebenefitsofthosewhoprovidehelp.3.Onlyinthiswaycanwebesurethat,ontheonehand,thosewhoareinneedcanreceivetimelyaidand,ontheotherhand,warm-heartedpeopleneversufferfromloss.网络教育盛行Causes:1.TherapiddevelopmentandavailabilityofInternethasprovidedonlineeducationwithtechnologybasis.2.Onlineeducationenablesthosewhocan’tstudyfulltimeatschooltoacquireknowledgeconveniently.Comments:Personally,Iappreciatethisnewformofeducation.1.It’sindeedahelpfulcomplementtothetraditionaleducationalmeans.2.Itcanprovidedifferentlearnerswithmoreflexibleandvariouswaystolearn.3.Mostofall,itisagoodchoiceforustocombineworkwithlearning.小孩使用手机For:1.Childrencancontactwiththeirparentsorfriendsconvenientlyespeciallywhentheyareconfrontedwithdifficultiesordangers.2.Moreover,mobilephonesequippedwithvariousinterestinggamesarealsoaconvenientsourceofrecreationandrelaxationforchildrenwhohavebeenunder

20enormouspressuresfromanoverloadofstudies.Against:1.Beingaddictedtomobilephonesisnothingbutawasteoftheirpreciousandlimitedtime,whichwillalsodefinitelyinterferewiththeirstudies.2.Additionally,radiationfrommobilephonewillexertadetrimentalimpactonchildren’sbodyhealth.Comments：大学生就业难现象Causes：1.Nowadayscollegestudentsaimtoohigh.mostcollegestudentswouldratherstayathomedoingnothingbutwaitingfortheiridealjobs.(Alltheywantare"good"jobswhichcouldofferdecentsalaries,comfortableworkingconditionsandhighsocialstatus.)2.Anotherreasonisthatmanycollegesanduniversitiesfailtoadapttheirmajorstotherapiddevelopmentandgrowingdemandofeconomy.Socompaniesoftenfindthatstudentsareusuallynotfitfortheirpositions.Measures:1.Aboveall,collegestudentsshouldrealizetheirowndefectsandfurtherimprovethemselvestokeeptheircompetitiveedgeinsociety.2.Moreover,collegesoruniversitiesshouldprovidemoretrainingsandinternshipopportunitiesbeforethestudentsentersociety.3.Lastly,collegestudentsshouldholdarightattitudetowardsjobsandsettheirjobexpectationsatasuitableandrationallevel4.Onlywiththesemeasuresadoptedcancollegestudentsfindasatisfactoryandidealjobandhaveabrilliantfuture.频繁跳槽For：1.Theyoungstersaremorelikelytohaveabetterknowledgeofotherfieldsandthentoexpandtheirhorizons.2.Changingjobsfrequentlyoffersworkersachancetomoveuptoabetterposition.Against：1.Asthecommonsayinggoes,“arollingstonegathersnomoss.”Themorefrequentyouchangeyourjob,thelesslikelyyouaretobeanexpertinaparticulararea.2.Secondly,thisbehaviorwillleaveontheemployersanimpressionofinstabilityandimmaturity.Comments:1.Frommyperspective,frequentjob-hoppingwouldnotnecessarilybeabadthing.2.Itmayofferthemabroaderspaceforcareerdevelopment.(Whenpeoplejoinacompany，thebrandnewworkingenvironment，newcolleaguesandnewenterpriseculturalatmospherewilldefinitelymotivatetheirenthusiasmforthenewjobandthus,prompttheircareertoanewlevel.)3.Thus,IwilltryseveralpostsbeforefindingtheonethatisperfectlyfitformeandafterthatIwillremaininthepostandsparenoeffortstohaveitwelldone.

21传统文化流失（traditionalculturemissing）Causes：1.Tostartwith，quiteafewpeopleholdthatChinesetraditionalcultureisoflittleuseinmodernsocietyandithasfailedtomeettheneedsofsociety’sdevelopment.2.What’smore,Chinesetraditionalculturesfacinganunprecedentedchallenge.Richandcolorfulculturefromforeigncountrieshasdistractedpeople’sattention,fewpeoplecanresistthetemptationofforeignculture.(64words)Measures：1.Firstly,Alarge-scaleeducationcampaign,combinedwithvariousinterestingtraditionalandculturalactivities,shouldbelaunchedtoinformthepublicoftheimportanceoftheprotectionofChinesetraditionalculture.2.Additionally,Chinesetraditionalcultureneedstoadjusttotherapiddevelopmentandthegrowingdemandofsociety.3.Onlyinthiswaycanwepreventthelossoftraditionalcultureandhanddownthetraditionalculturalheritagesfromgenerationtogeneration.电视选秀热Causes：1.Talentshowprovidesthemwithastagetodisplaytheirtalents.2.TheythinkattendingthePKshowsisashortcuttothesuccess.Harms：1.Regardingtalentshowasahigh-roadtosuccess,theymaydespisethewayofachievingsuccessbyhardworkandthusformahabitofseekingquicksuccessandinstantbenefits.2.Iftheyoungpeoplefailintheseshows,theywillsufferapsychologicalunbalance.