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1、英语写作常见错误与分析2010-1-14GUCASEnglishDepart.HuJiangbo1nWhenonehavemoney,hecandowhathewantto.n--whenonehasmoney,hecandowhathewants(todo)主谓不一致2010-1-14GUCASEnglishDepart.HuJiangbo2nTherearemanywaystoknowthesociety.ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.nTherearemanywaystoknowsociet
2、y,forexample,byTV,radio,andnewspaper.句子不完整--在口语中,交际双方可借助手势
语贯穿上下文,不完整的句子完全可以被理
解.可是书面语就不同了,句子结构不完整会
令意思表达不清,这种情况常常发生在主句写
完以后,笔者又想加些补充说明时发生.2010-1-14GUCASEnglishDepart.HuJiangbo3nMarywasfriendlytomysisterbecause
shewantedhertobeherbridesmaid.
nMarywasfriendlytomysisterbecaus
3、e
shewantedmysistertobeherbridesmaid指代不清2010-1-14GUCASEnglishDepart.HuJiangbo4nAndwecanalsoknowthesocietybyservingityourself.n--Andwecanalsoknowthesocietybyservingitourselves.nAttheageoften,mygrandfatherdied.
n--WhenIwasten,mygrandfatherdied.
nTodowellincollege,goodgradesar
4、eessential.
n--Todowellincollege,astudentneedsgoodgrades.2010-1-14GUCASEnglishDepart.HuJiangbo5Leaveoutthewordinthatsentence
becauseitistoodifficult.nLeaveoutthewordbecauseitistoodifficult.Or:nLeaveoutthewordbecausewithitthesentencewouldbetoodifficult.2010-1-14GUCASEnglishD
5、epart.HuJiangbo6nTherearemanywayswegettoknowtheoutsideworld.--Therearemanywaysforustolearnabouttheoutsideworld.Or:Therearemanywaysthroughwhichwecan
becomeacquaintedwiththeoutsideworld.不间断句子2010-1-14GUCASEnglishDepart.HuJiangbo7nTheincreasinguseofchemicalobstaclesinagricultu
6、realsomakespollution.nTheabusiveuseofchemicalsubstancesinagriculturealsocauses/leadstopollution.措词毛病2010-1-14GUCASEnglishDepart.HuJiangbo8nFreshwater,itisthemostimportantthingsoftheearth.nFreshwateristhemostimportantthingintheworld.不连贯2010-1-14GUCASEnglishDepart.HuJiangbo9n
7、Hurryingtotheclassroom,noonewasthere.n...shesawnobodythere.nReturninghomeafterwork,supperwaswaitingforhim,inthekitchen.n...hesawsupperwaitingforhiminthekitchen.n主语不正确2010-1-14GUCASEnglishDepart.HuJiangbo10主谓关系nAllthepeopleintheroomisenjoyinghisstories.nAllthepeopleintheroom
8、areenjoyinghisstories.nThenumberofdoctorsareverysmall.
nThenumberofdoctorsisverysm