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1、2021/10/8GUCASEnglishDepart.HuJiangbo1英语写作常见错误与分析2021/10/8GUCASEnglishDepart.HuJiangbo2Whenonehavemoney,hecandowhathewantto.--whenonehasmoney,hecandowhathewants(todo)主谓不一致2021/10/8GUCASEnglishDepart.HuJiangbo3Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety.ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.--
2、Therearemanywaystoknowsociety,forexample,byTV,radio,andnewspaper.--Error:Sentencefragments:anincompletesentenceoradependentclausepunctuatedasasentence,beginningwithacapitalletterandendingwithaperiod.SentencefragmentsIfyoufindthatwritingishard,it’sbecauseitishard.Oneofthehardestthin
3、gsthatpeopledo.--Ifyoufindthatwritingishard,it’sbecauseitishard.It’soneofthehardestthingsthatpeopledo.Reason:Foragroupofwordstobeacompletesentence,itmusthaveanindependentclausewithasubjectandapredicate.Foracademicwriting,fragmentsarenotallowed.Journalisticfragmentsentencesareusedfo
4、remphasis.2021/10/8GUCASEnglishDepart.HuJiangbo4Fragment:Purdueoffersmanymajorsinengineering.Suchaselectrical,chemical,andindustrialengineering.PossibleRevision:Purdueoffersmanymajorsinengineering,suchaselectrical,chemical,andindustrialengineering.Fragment:Ineedtofindanewroommate.B
5、ecausetheoneIhavenowisn'tworkingouttoowell.PossibleRevision:IneedtofindanewroommatebecausetheoneIhavenowisn'tworkingouttoowell.2021/10/8GUCASEnglishDepart.HuJiangbo51.NomainverbAstorywithdeepthoughtsandemotions.Revisions:Directobject:Shetoldastorywithdeepthoughtsandemotions.2.NoSub
6、jectFragment:Withtheultimateeffectofalladvertisingistoselltheproduct.Revisions:Removepreposition:Theultimateeffectofalladvertisingistoselltheproduct.2021/10/8GUCASEnglishDepart.HuJiangbo6MixedconstructionsBecauseHemingway’sstyleissimplemakeshiswritingaccessibletoallreaders.--Becaus
7、eHemingway’sstyleissimple,hiswritingisaccessibletoallreaders.Or:Hemingway’ssimplestylemakeshiswritingaccessibletoallreaders.Mixedconstructionsoccurinasentencewhenthewriterstartsoutwritingonesentencepatternandendsupwritinganother.2021/10/8GUCASEnglishDepart.HuJiangbo7End-stoperrorIa
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