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1、TEM4新题型写作题型变化：Previously:陈述观点论证观点得出结论Now：概括材料__提出观点并论证观点——得出结论(重申观点或提出建议)材料作文Tactics：1.仔细审题，分析材料(2-3mins)2.列出提纲，确定布局(3-4mins)Para.1.引出话题，概括材料(summarize,paraphrase)Para.2.提出自身观点，列出理由论证Para.3.重申观点或提出建议3.正式写作(30・35mins)4.检查并优化(2-3mins)评分标准如何总结材料第一段：Describethephenomenon/introducethediscussed
2、topic+opinionsfrombothsides/summarizeorparaphrasethetopicsentencesintheexcerpt・参考范文WithIntelligentMachinestoDotheThinking,WillOurBrainsGetLazy?Nowadays,manyaspectsofpeopleddailylifehaveundergoneconsiderablechangesbecauseoftherecentdevelopmentinartificialintelligence・Obviously,artificialin
3、telligencehasalreadycompletelyrenovatedpeople'slifestyle.Ontheonehand,thecontributionofartificialintelligencetothesocietyisprominentandpeople'sdependenceonitisanirreversibletrend・Peopleenjoythebenefitsandconveniencebroughtbyintelligentmachines.Ontheotherhand,peoplearestillconcernedaboutit
4、snegativeimpact,forexample,whetherourbrainswillregresswithintelligentmachinestodothethinking.第二段：先表明自己观点Stance:asfarasFmconcerned,astome,frommyperspective,inmyview,personallyspeaking,frommypointofview再分条论证（灵活运用连接词）1・Firstandforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast2.First,second,third3・Inthefirstp
5、lace,inthesecondplace,lastbutnotleast4.Initially,besides,furthermore,lastbutnotleast范文：Inmyopinion,artificialintelligencewillenableourbrainstogetmorecreative・Admittedly,alotofworkhasbeendonebyintelligentmachines.Itseemsthatthefunctionofpeoplehasbeenweakenedandpeople'sbrainshavebeenreplace
6、d・Asamatteroffact,thankstointelligentmachines,peoplecanexpandtheircreativeenergyandaddnewvarieties・Simplyspeaking,whenpeoplearefreefromtedious,repetitive,sometimesevendangerouswork,workefficiencywillundoubtedlybeimproved.Asaresult,peoplecansparemoretimetodowhattheywantandpursuewhattheydre
7、amof,whichisthepremiseofcreativity・Moreover,creativitystemsprimarilyfromknowledgeandthinking.Oncepeoplehavetheopportunitytodomorethinkingandlearning,theirintelligencewouldbeenhancedratherthanweakened・第三段：enrichyourrestatement/expressyourhopes/givesuggestionsAllinall
