2016专四作文讲评及写作指导

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1、一、2016年专业四级写作题目概况(%1)测试要求：写一篇200个单词左右的作文，考试时间45分钟，计20分。(-)2016年专四作文评分标准：1.summary(6分)2.comments(12分)A.思想与表达(ideasandarguments)7分(满分7分，其中6-7分优秀,4・5分良好，3分一般，分较差。)(1)思想内容(content)内容切题；内容充实；观点明确；论据支持论点；有独到见解。(2)表达效果(effectiveness)表达清晰；有说服力。(3)篇章组织结构(rhetoricalorganization)每段有主题句；句间衔接自然；段间过渡自然；第一部分明确提出观

2、点；最后一部分自然得出结论；段落排列合理。B.语言运用能力(languageuse)5分(满分5分，其中5分优秀，3・4分良好，2分一般，1分较差。)(1)准确性(correctness)语法正确；句子结构正确；固定搭配正确；用词准确。(2)丰富性(richness)词汇丰富；句子形式多样。(3)得体性(appropriateness)语气恰当；语言地道。3•写作规范mechanics(2分)(满分2分，其中2分优秀，1.5分良好，1分一般，0.5分较差)单词拼写正确；标点符号正确；大小写正确；书写美观；卷而整洁。范文1Whenitcomestowhetherparentsshouldtak

3、etheirchildrentospendholidaysduringterm-time,viewsontheissuevaryfrompersontoperson.（引入话题）Parentsclaimthatbydoingso,theycansavealotofmoneybornofbusyschoolholidays.Educationalofficialsstronglyopposethistendencyonthegroundthatitencouragestruancy,whichinturndamagesachild'seducation.（两种观点）Asaresult,UKe

4、ducationauthoritiesarenowbanningparentsfromtakingtheirchildrenforholidaysduringterm-timetosavemoney.（概括材米斗）Frommyperspective,themeritsofbanningternvtimeholidaysoutweighitsdemerits.（陈述观点）Tobeginwith,takingtoughmeasuresonthiskindoftruancyisconducivetothenormalteachingprocess,oneofthekeyelementstoguar

5、anteekid'sacademicperformance.（理由一）Asweknow,currently,teachershavethediscretiontoapproveacertaintimeofabsencefromschoolforeachchild.Bydefinitelyabolishingtherightofheadteachersto"authorizeabsence5'fromtheclassroom,thoseteacherscanrarelybepesteredbyparentswhowanttotakechildrentogoonaholidayjusttosav

6、emoney,whichseverelydisruptsteachingprocess.（具体论证一）Whatmore,withoutstrictpenaltiesimposedontheparentswholeadtotheirkiefsplayingtruant,thoseparentscangraduallyviewaskingforholidayleaveasaright.（理由二）Oncethisculturalexpectationisformed,theleveloftruancywilldramaticallyincrease.（假设论证二）Accordingly,thegr

7、owingtrendofternvtimeholidaysshouldbebannedwithnodelay.（重申论点）Inthisway,teacherscanimpartknowledgewithoutdisturbanceandparentswillbedeterredfromsavingmoneyattheexpenseofsacrificingtheirkid'seducation.范文2Newr