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1、AWinterWalk(excerpts)冬日漫步(节选)HenryDavidThoreauFamouswriter&philosopherMasterpiece:WaldenLakeAffectiononnatureThewindhasgentlymurmuredthroughtheblinds,orpuffedwithfeatherysoftnessagainstthewindows,andoccasionallysighedlikeasummerzephyrliftingtheleavesalong,thelivelongnight.寒风私语,轻透帘席,柔若
2、翎羽,微拂窗棂;偶如低叹,似夏之风,抚动细叶,长夜不休。Thewindhasgentlymurmuredthroughtheblinds,orpuffedwithfeatherysoftnessagainstthewindows,andoccasionallysighedlikeasummerzephyrliftingtheleavesalong,thelivelongnight.寒风私语,轻透帘席,柔若翎羽,微拂窗棂;偶如低叹,似夏之风,抚动细叶,长夜不休。技术要点:1.主题关联性增译:文章主题是冬日漫步,既然季节是冬,那么风应该是寒冷的,故把thewind译成
3、“寒风”,贴合主题,且使译文更优美。2.语义嬗变:puff→微拂参数因子:gently,featherysoftnesspuff:1.toblowinshortsuddengustofwind2.Toemitpuffs短促而有力地吹?喷?微拂!lift:movesth.toanotherposition,especiallyupwards.抬起?吹起?抚动!Theearthitselfhasslept,asitwereitsfirst,notitslastsleep,savewhensomestreet-signorwood-housedoorhasfaintly
4、creakeduponitshinge,cheeringforlornnatureathermidnightwork,—theonlysoundawaketwixtVenusandMars,—advertisingusofaremoteinwardwarmth,adivinecheerandfellowship,wheregodsaremettogether,butwhereitisverybleakformentostand.大地已酣然入睡,此非长眠,乃年中初次休憩。夜半虽至,大自然仍辛勤不休,唯有街上招牌和木屋门轴时而吱吱作响,虽极细极微,但亦是孤寂大自然的唯
5、一抚慰。这是金星与火星间唯一清醒着的天籁,唤醒了我们灵魂深处的温情,神圣的愉悦感和友情。那是诸神际会之时方能体会的境界,然而对世间凡人,此番寂寥,却是难以消受。Theearthitselfhasslept,asitwereitsfirst,notitslastsleep,savewhensomestreet-signorwood-housedoorhasfaintlycreakeduponitshinge,cheeringforlornnatureathermidnightwork,—theonlysoundawaketwixtVenusandMars,—adve
6、rtisingusofaremoteinwardwarmth,adivinecheerandfellowship,wheregodsaremettogether,butwhereitisverybleakformentostand.大地已酣然入睡,此非长眠,乃年中初次休憩。夜半虽至,大自然仍辛勤不休,唯有街上招牌和木屋门轴时而吱吱作响,虽极细极微,但亦是孤寂大自然的唯一抚慰。这是金星与火星间唯一清醒着的天籁,唤醒了我们灵魂深处的温情,神圣的愉悦感和友情。那是诸神际会之时方能体会的境界,然而对世间凡人,此番寂寥,却是难以消受。技术要点:1.词性转化:a.动词转化为名
7、词:cheering→抚慰n.b.形容词转化为名词:bleak→寂寥n.句式因而更显灵活多变2.换序:athermidnightwork3.增译语境化含义:athermidnightworkCheer:1.Toencouragewithorasifwithapplause2.Comfort喝彩?抚慰!点评:根据语境,cheering一词在此处可以为:为荒寂的大自然增添几丝生气。因为上文说白雪覆盖的大地已然酣睡,此刻又是晚上,人们也入梦乡,此刻的野外已是荒寂一片,了无生气。几声吱吱呀呀的门轴声(开门),让人感到几丝生气。——Zeng屋顶之上,已是白雪皑皑。屋檐下,篱
8、笆上悬挂着