常见写作错误分析报告new

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1、标准文档一．不一致（Disagreements）所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，它还包括了数的不一致，时态不一致及代词不一致等。Sample1:Whenonehavemoney,hecandowhathewantto.Onceonehasmoney,hecandowhathewants(todo).Sample2:Adrivershouldneverraceyourmotorwithoutawarm-up.Adrivershouldneverracehismotorwithoutawarm-up.Sample3:Whenoneissick,youdon’tw

2、antcompany.实用文案标准文档Whenyouaresick,youdon’twantcompany.Whenoneissick,onedoesn’twantcompany.Sample4:Iwasextremelysorryyouareinjured.Iamextremelysorryyouareinjured.一．修饰语错位(MisplacedModifiers)Misplacedanddanglingmodifiersarephrasesthatarenotlocatedproperlyinrelationtothewordstheymodi

3、fy.Misplacedmodifiersleadtoillogicalsentencesthataredifficulttofollow.Modifiersareassociatedwiththeclosestwordtheycouldpossiblybelongto.Whenamodifierslipsoutofplace,therearisesconfusion.英语与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化．对于这一点中国学生往往没有引起足够的重视，因而造成了不必要的误解．Sample5：实用文案标准文档IbelieveI

4、candoitwellandIwillbetterknowtheworldoutsidethecampus.IbelieveIcandoitwellandIwillknowtheworldoutsidethecampusbetter.Sample6:AsmallbooksatonthedeskthatSarahhadread.AsmallbookthatSarahhadreadsatonthedesk.★修改原则　　A.避免修饰语错置的关键是使修饰语尽可能靠近被修饰语。　　B.副词短语和时间、地点、方式等状语从句可以万无一失地置于句首。　　C.把那些很难

5、安排位置的修饰语置于句首。实用文案标准文档D.避免因为一个修饰语和句子中多个成份之间存在潜在的修饰关系而引发歧义现象。四．句子不完整（SentenceFragments）在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解．可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常发生在主句写完以后，笔者又想加些补充说明时发生．不完整句不具备完整主谓结构的句子。依赖于特定的语境，能够独立使用并有一定的交际功能。常见错误包括：从属连词引起的破句，ing分词和不定式结构引起的错误，增添细节引起的破句和缺少主语或者谓语动词的破句。Samp

6、le7:Becausethekidsthoughttheirwagesweretoolow.Becausethekidsthoughttheirwagesweretoolow,theydemandedahighpay.Sample8:Peopleworkedtogetherontheassemblyline.实用文案标准文档Movingquicklyandefficiently.Theywantedtomakeasmuchmoneyaspossible.Peopleworkedtogetherontheassemblyline,movingquickly

7、andefficiently.Theywantedtomakesmuchmoneyaspossible.Sample9:Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety.ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon.Therearemanywaystoknowsociety,forexample,byTV,radio,andnewspaper.Sample10:Awomantoberespectedandfeared.Sheisawomantoberespectedandfeared.Sample11:Hew

8、illsuretocomeandhelpme.Hewillbesuretocom