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1、2014江苏高考任务型作文教案Teachingaims:letstudentsmasterhowtowriteagoodcomposition.Teachingdifficulties:somegeneralmistakesandhowtopolishthemup.阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Itwas7:30inthemorning.AsusualIwasonthesubwaytoschool．Itwassocrowdedwithpeoplethatitfeltliketh

2、eairconditionerwasn'tworking.Iwasstandingtherelookingaround.Then,Isawanoldladygetonthetrainwitha7-year-oldchildwhoseemedtobehergrandson.Awarm-heartedgentlemangenerouslyofferedhisseattotheoldlady.Insteadofsittingdownherself,however,theoldladycalledhergran

3、dsonoverandtoldhimtosit.Soonerorlater,childrenmatureandstepintothecomplicatedworld.Loveisnecessaryintheearlydevelopmentofchildren,yet,tothedisappointmentofmany,toomuchlovedefinitelypreventschildrenfromlearningtherulesoftherealworld.Teachingthechildaboutt

4、herulesofsocietywithinthefamilyhelpsthechildtoachievesuccesslater.Bygivingupseatstotheirchildren,grandparentsmaydestroykids'bestchanceforcharacterdevelopment.【写作内容］1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2.以约120个词谈谈你对长辈溺爱孩子的看法，内容包括：（1)描述长辈溺爱孩子的表现。（2）溺爱孩子的后果．（3)你对长辈溺爱孩子的看法。Ste

5、p1.审题指导Pagraph1概括（30字左右）Thispassagemainlytalksabouttheimportanceofcharacterdevelopmentofchildrenbygivinganexampleofanoldladywhogivesuptheseatofferedbyagentlemantohergrandchild.Pagraph2溺爱孩子的表现：1）对孩子有求必应，百依百顺，满足孩子的要求。2）孩子犯了错误，不批评，未能以恰当的方式教育。3）为孩子包办一切，帮他们铺平

6、成功的道路。1.Parentsoftendenynothingtotheirchildrenandmeet/satisfy/suittheirdemands.2.Whenchildrenmakeamistake/dosomethingwrong,parentsdonotcriticize/scoldthemandfailtoeducatetheminaproperway.3.Parentsdoeverythingfortheirchildrenandsparenoefforttopavethewayfo

7、rtheirsuccess.Asaconsequence,childrenbecomesodependentontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.Pagraph3溺爱孩子的后果：1）自私，不顾别人的感受。2）不尊重他人，甚至犯罪。3）独立生活能力差。3　Whenthesespoiledchildrengrowup,manyofthemmaygreatlydisappointtheirparents.Someofthem

8、evencommitcrimes.Pagraph4看法：　　　　1）不应该溺爱孩子。2）让他们经历困难，学会独立。Suchasituationisofgreatconcern.Inmyopinion,overprotectionandtoomuchisbadforchildren’sdevelopment.Insteadofdoingeverythingforthem,parentsshouldencouragechildrentoover