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1、Unit4Iusedtobeafraidofbeingdark. 写作西安市第八十一中学李玲玲usedtobe…Askandanswer!usedtobe…Theyusedtobestudents.Aftershegrowsup,shebecomesateacher.Askandanswer!usedtodo…Askandanswer!usedtodo…Theyusedtowalktoschool.Today,theytakethebus.Askandanswer!usedtodo…listentopopmusicreadalotofbooksSheusedto
2、…makesentence!Iusedto…makesentence!Topic:随着时间的流逝，我们的外貌和性格都回发生许多变化，而且我们的生活也会发生许多变化，请你根据你的实际情况，描写你近几年来所发生的变化。要求：1.参考提示，可适当发挥。2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。3.80-100词。BeforeWriting思路点拨GroupWork！HowI’vechanged!appearanceappearanceshort,thin,haveshorthairwearglasseshumorous,serioushobbyBeginnings开门见山式2.
3、问题式3.引用名人名言式（Asagoingsays,”…”）Endings1.总结概括式2.表达愿望式Timeflies!Lookingbackthepastyears,I’vechangedalot.DoyouwanttoknowwhatIusedtobelike?Letmetellyou.Astimegoesby,myappearance,character,andlifehavechangedalot.Inaword,Iamdifferentfromthepast.WhatgreatchangedIhave!Iwish…GroupWork！WhileWrit
4、ingHowI’veChanged!Timeflies!Iwillleavemymotherschoolaftermorethan60days.Lookingback,I’vechangedalot.IrememberwhenIwasinGrade7,Iwasveryquiet,notdaretospeakaloud.AndIusedtobeshortandthin,butnowIbecomestrong,tallandoutgoing.Asyouknow,Iusedtohavelotsofhobbies,butnowIjusthavenotimeforthem.
5、Igaveupcollectingmodelcars,sentawaymydogandstoppedpainting.Iusedtoenjoymyselfwithmyfriendsatweekends,doexerciseinthemorningwhileIspendmostofmytimedoingmylessonsnow.Inaword,Ican’tbelievemylifeissodifferentfromthepast.But,anyway,IhopeIwillbehappyandenjoymyfuturelife.AfterWritingStep1自我欣
6、赏，自我修正要求：大声朗读自己的文章，并试着自己从结构、时态、主谓一致、人称、字数、拼写、大小写、标点等修改自己的文章。AfterWritingStep2小组成员交换互评中考评分标准1写作基本要求：人称、2要点齐全3结构：开头、正文、结尾4好词好句。修改符号：漏句∧，错处○，语法G，人称P，时态错误T。Step3推荐展示，相互学习。HomeworkAfterclass,correctyourwritingsmore,thencopyitonyourwritingbooks.Thankyou!
