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1、这篇文章是关于我们上课所讲的altruism的文章,根据上课所讲述的综合写作的阅读和听力的驳斥关系,以及二者的驳斥关系一定会通过三个mainpoints来体现,那么根据上课讲的内容我们来做一下的内容总结和套写.听力和阅读的驳斥主题:altruism是否真的是altruistic?我们所获得的听力内容要点为:1thesentinelmeerkateatbeforetheystandguard,sotheyactuallyhadaveryfullstomach2thesentinelisthemostlikelytoescape,becauseth
2、eyarethefirsttoseethepredatorandothermeerkatswillscatteraroundandbeingreaterdanger3thepeopledonatetheirorganstostrangersorfamilymembersactuallyobtainsomeappreciationorapprovalfromthesocietyandthepublic(somenon-materialrewardsorincreasedsenseofself-worth)根据这些信息,我们把他们放进之前教给大家的
3、句子中来看看文章的构造和语言的表达.记住,在写综合写作的时候,语言的要求不是最主要的,关键就是听力内容的呈现度和表达度有多高和多准确细致,越多分就越高!Theprofessormakesthepointthataltruisticbehaviorsinhumansormeerkatsareactuallynottheperceivedideaofbenefitingotherswhilesacrificingone’sowninterests,whichtotallydiffersfromwhatisillustratedinthereadin
4、gpassage.Contrarytothebeliefinthereadingpassagethatthesentinelstandsguardwithouteatinganything,thespeakerstatesthatthemeerkatwhichstandguardoutsideinfacteatbeforetheygooutforfindingthepredator,thatistosay,ithasafairlyfullstomachwhentheyperformtheir“altruistic”behaviorforthei
5、rgroupmembers.Andthelecturercontradictstheviewpointshowedinthereadingthatthemeerkatwillbeingreaterdangeraftersendinganalarmtoothersbystatingthatthealarmsentinelactuallywillbetheonewhichdoesnotcatchtheattentionfromthepredatorsbecausetheystandneartheburrowtorashintoandbecauseo
6、thergroupmemberswilleasilyattracttheattentionfromthepredatorwhenscatteringaround,namely,itistheothermeerkatsthatareingreaterdanger,notthesentinelitself.Asregardsthehumanaltruisticbehavior,whattheprofessorstatesinthelisteningistotallyopposingtotheideaofthereadingpassage.Thesp
7、eakerpointsoutthefactthatwhenhumanbeingsdosomealtruisticbehaviorlikedonatingtheirorganstofamilymembersorstrangers,theyinfactreceiveandenjoysomeappreciationandapprovalfromthesociety,suchnon-materialrewardsshallnotbeconsideredasaltruistic.Soobviously,theideasfromthelisteningma
8、terialandthereadingpassagearestronglycontradictorytoeachother.(一共264个单词,大家可
