托福综合写作的范文

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1、这篇作文是针对TPO第四套的综合写作(关于恐龙是否是恒温动物)写的，虽然有一些小错误，但ETS评分为满分。　　　SampleResponse　　　Theprofessoractuallycontradictsthestatementsmadeinthepassage.Sheisoftheviewthatdinosaursarenotendothermsi.e.theywerenotabletokeeptheirbodytemperatureataconstantrate.　　　　Theprofessorcontradictstheissueofdinosaursbeing

2、endothersbasedontheavailabilityoffossilsbeingavailableinthwepolarregions,shesaythatthepolarregionsinthosedayswerenotascoldastheyaretodayi.eatleastwarmenoughfordinosaurstolive.Durinharshwintersshesaysthatthereisapossibilityofthedinosaursactuallymigratingtowarmerregions.　　　　　Theissueoflegpo

3、sitionandmovementbeingusedasareasontoclasifythedinosaursasendothermsdoesnotpleasetheprofessoreither.Shesaysthatdinosaurshadlegsundertheirbodiestosupporttheirhugebodiesi.ethelegsunderthebodyofthedinosaurwereactuallytosupportthehugeweightofthedinosaurandnottoprovideitwithabodystructurelikee

4、ndotherms(whichisactuallysuitedforrunning).　　　Theprofessoracknowledgesthepresenceofhaversiancanalsbutalsopointsoutthatthatthefossilsshowthepresenceofgrowthrings.Theseringsoccurduetothethickeningofthebone.Thethickeningindicatesthatthedinosaurswere'ntactuallygrowingcontinuouslybutwereexperi

5、encingperiodsofrapidgrowthandperiodsofnogrowthinsuccesion.Thispattern.shesaysischaracteristicofnonendothermicaanimals.　　　Thusitcanbeinferredthattheprofessorchallengesthepassagebygivingreasonsastowhyshethinksthatthedinosaurisnotanendotherm.　　　DescriptionofResponse:　　　Despiteinitialappearan

6、ces,thisresponselargelysucceedsinclearlyandaccuratelypresentinghowthelecturepointstakeissuewiththepointsinthereadingpassagethatdinosaurswereendotherms.Thefirstpointregardingdinosaursinpolarregionscouldbeabitclearer.Otherwise,theresponsemainlysuffersfromtypographicalerrors,butthesearenotre

7、gardedasmajorproblems;itisobviousthatthewriterhasgoodcontrolofstructureandvocabularyandtheabilitytousethesetoconveyinanorganizedandlogicalmannerwhathasbeenunderstoodandasked.　　　我们并不主张考生死记范文，考试时如果遇到类似题目照搬上去，这并不能考察考生的写作能力。新托福考试写作多背一些范文，可以积累一些素材，像好的短语、词、句等，灵活运用。　　　3.No