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1、书面表达讲评DearPeter,Iamwritingtoaskwhetheryouareabletodomeafavor.假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一个英语笔友。请你写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：年龄；性别；爱好（旅游，运动，宠物等）。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.开头语已为你写好。1.文章体裁，格式2.要点3.布局(开头,中段,结尾)第一步：审题选择要点第二步：搜索相关词组或句型笔友penfriend/penpal爱好beinterestedi
2、n/enjoy/likehobby,interests旅游travel运动doingsports(游泳swim，爬山climb/hike,网球tennis,羽毛球badminton，乒乓球tabletennis)养宠物keeppets第三步：扩展成句1.我想找个笔友。Iwanttofind/haveapenfriend/penpal.2.希望她是个16左右的女孩。Ihopethatsheisalovelygirlabout16.3.她要和我有相同的爱好。Shehasthesameinterestsasme.4.她要喜欢旅游，喜欢运动，比如登山，打
3、乒乓球等。Sheenjoystravelling.Sheisinterestedindoingsports,suchasswimming,hiking,playingtabletennisandsoon.5.她最好也养宠物，因为我养宠物。Itwillbebetterifshekeepspets,forIhavekeptone.6.有这样的笔友，我可以和她分享共同的经历。Withsuchapenfriend,IthinkIcansharesuchexperiencesastravellingandtakingcareofpetswithher.7.
4、有助于我的英语学习。ItishelpfultomyEnglishstudy.加上有关过渡句及过渡词汇,连句成篇根据内容给作文分段注意格式第四步：连句成篇DearPeter,Iamwritingtoaskwhetheryouareabletodomeafavor.Iwanttohaveapenfriend.Hopefully,sheisabeautifulandlovelygirlwhoisabout16yearsold.She’dbetterhavethesameinterestsasme.AndIhopesheisinterestedintra
5、vellinganddoingsports,suchashiking,playingtabletennisandsoon.Itwillbebetterifshekeepsapet,forIhavekeptoneathomeforsometime.Withsuchapenfriend,IthinkIcansharesuchexperiencesastravellingandtakingcareofpetswithher.Besides,IbelieveitisalsohelpfultomyEnglishstudy.Bestwishes.yours,
6、LiHuaDearPeter,Iamwritingtoaskwhetheryouareabletodomeafavor.IwanttofindapenpalinEngland.Iwishthatheis16yearsold.BecauseI’m16yearsoldtoo.Ilikedoingsports,suchasplayingbasketball,playingfootballandsoon.Ifhealsolikesthose,Ithinkwewillbecomegoodfriendsquickly.Ialsolikereading,ifh
7、ealsoenjoysthis,that’ssogood.Iwishheisoutgoing,becauseI’moutgoingandIliketotalkwithmygoodfriends.IalsowishthathecanspeakalittleChinese,it’ssogoodforustotalkwitheachother.That'sallmyideas.Seeyousoon.Yours,LiHuaDearPeter,Iamwritingtoaskwhetheryouareabletodomeafavor.It’ssodiffic
8、ultformetolearnEnglishthatIwanttomakeanEnglishpenpal.Ihopeheisa16-ye
