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1、高考英语一轮复习写作第14讲如何写话题类记叙文二、常用句式(1)Onemorning/day.../Lastweek/Saturday.../Onawinterday.../Thismorning.../ItwasJune20,2010.../OnMay4,2010...(2)...wasdoingsth....whensuddenly.../Assoonas...+主句/When...+主句/BeforeIcould...+主句(3)As/Because/Since+从句+主句(4)Aftersometime.../Afterawhile.
2、../Afewminuteslater.../Amomentlater.../Then...(5)Someweredoing...someweredoing...and/whileothersweredoing...(6)...justthen.../Atthatmoment.../Hardlyhad...when...(7)And.../So.../Therefore.../Asaresult.../Forthat...三、典题示例真题在线(2014课标全国Ⅱ)一家英语报社向中学生征文,主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文
3、。1.家庭;2.工作;3.业余生活。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好。Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikeinthefuture.文章体裁记叙文中心人称第一人称主体时态一般将来时要点布局1.引题句:我经常想象未来的生活(已给出)。2.主题句:统领下文,提炼主题,如十年后我的生活将和现在大不相同。3.要点或扩展句:4.结尾句:总结全文,紧扣主题,如我的生活将丰富多彩。审题谋篇考场作文:Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikeinthefut
4、ure.Intenyears,Iwillhavemyownfamily,①leadahappylife.Asformyjob,Iwillbuildupmyownbusiness.Notonlywillit②helpsmemakealiving,butitwillalsocontributetothedevelopmentofthesociety.WhenIhavefreetime,Iwilltake③regularlyexerciseandbecomeavolunteertohelptheelderlypeople.Itisofgreatus
5、etomylifequality.Inbrief,Iwillsparenoefforttomakemyfuturelifemeaning-ful.文章提升:1.修改错误:1)lead如果作谓语动词前面应加连词and,故应将①lead改为。2)在notonly引导的倒装句型中助动词will提前,主语后动词需用动词原形,故应将②helps改为。3)修饰名词需用形容词,故将③regularly改为。2.提升建议:将画线部分改为非谓语动词作状语的形式:。阅卷现场参考范文:Ioftenimaginewhatmylifewillbelikeinthefu
6、ture.Ithinkmylifewillbeverydifferentfromwhatitistodayintenyears.Iwillbetwenty-eightyearsoldbythen.Iwillhavemyownfamily,probablywithalovelybaby.IhopeIwillworkinacomputercompanyasaprogramdesigner.Iwillenjoymyworkandgetalongwellwithmycolleagues.IwilldoagoodjobinwhateverIdo.Inm
7、ysparetime,Iwillcontinuetotakeregularexercise,suchasswimming,runningandvariousballgames.Duringmyholidays,Iwilltravelaroundtheworld.Inaword,mylifewillbericherandmorecolorful.答案1.修改错误:1)leading 2)help 3)regular2.提升建议:Whenhavingfreetime四、高分秀场(2015山东临沂高三一模)假定你的名字叫鲁沂,你打算2015年高考结
8、束后在暑假期间打工。现在请你用英文写一篇短文介绍自己。内容要点如下:★年龄、性别★性格、爱好★打工理由注意:1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。