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1、Howtogethighgradesinthewritingtask?GuideforEnglishwriting英语作文写作指导谷城三中帅德胜Reviewofthewritingtaskinthe2012CollegeEntranceExamination请根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。Youcannotchoosewhatyouaregiven,butyoucanchoosehowyoumakeuseofit.注意:①无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语;②除诗歌外,文体不限;③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称;④词
2、数为120左右。注意:第4条今年改为:不少于120个词Astudent’swritingIrememberwhenmybirthday,mymotherbuymeapresent.Itwasacelphone.Iwasveryhappy,becauseIdidn’tthinkshewouldbuyacelphoneforme.WhenIwasatschool,Ioftensentmessagestomyclassmates,sometimesIplaygamesonit.Mystudyfelldownsharply.Mytea
3、chertoldmymother.Mymotherwasangryandscoldme.Irealizemymistake.Ishouldnotusecelphoneforplaying.Ishoulduseitforgoodgoal.Fromthenon,Ibegantostudyhard.Iwillusethecelphonewell.Ican’tchoosewhatisgiven,butIwillmakegooduseofit.10Conclusionofcommonmistakesandproblemsinthewri
4、ting1.Awholepassage,noparagraphdivided2.DirecttranslationandChinglishexpression3.Verbtensesnotinagreement4.Impropersentencepatterns5.Driftingoffthetopicorleavingoutsomerequiredinformation6.spellingmistakeswithoutanyadvancedvocabularyorsentencesEnjoyanddiscussSeeingt
5、hetopic,allthatcomestomymindisTIME.NoonecandecidetheamountoftimegivenbyGod,sohowtomakeuseofitreallymakesadifference.Justasthesayinggoes,timeislimitedandlosttimeisneverfoundagain,whichevidentlyshowsustheimportanceoftreasuringtime.However,Ididn’trealizeituntilIcameacr
6、ossafailureinabigexam.ItwasinSenior2thatIbegantoplaycomputergames.SoonIgotsoaddictedtothemthateverynightIslippedoutofschooltoplaycomputergames.Asaconsequence,IsleptinclassinthedaytimeandmystudiesfellsharplybeforeIcouldrealizemymistake.Precioustimeslippedawayinmydrea
7、msandcomputergamesandthereforeIfailedinthefinalexam.Lookingatthepoormarks,howIwishIhadn’twastedsomuchtimeplayingcomputergameswhenIshouldhavestudiedhard.Afallintothepit,againinyourwit.Everyminutecounts.NowIcompletelyunderstandtheimportanceoftreasuringtime.Frommypersp
8、ective,timemeanslife.Onlybyseizingeverysecond,canwehaveabrightfuture.howtogethighgrades?advancedvocabulary.colourfulsentences,especiallyin