作文指导二选材之典型遣词之精准

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1、作文指导二选材之典型遣词之精准一、选取事例方法指导1、选取事例常犯问题：（1）、事例不典型，难以恰到好处地阐释主题（2）、事例典型，但利用事例的角度时而与主题不符甚至无关（3）、所选事例难以用作者现有知识清楚表达，造成晦涩难懂2、恰当选材之要素：（1）、选材首先得典型，然后才追求新颖（平时要善于积累素材）（2）、切取材料为主题服务的角度叙述，避免闲话废话（3）、选材要在自己的表达能力范围内，能有利于展示作者的最佳写作能力和水平二、分析以下文章1.Thereisnosuchthingasafreelunchintheworld,norahitten-to-deathra

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