m4-u2 语言点-writing(伟人事迹生平)

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1、M4U1-3写作（伟人生平）(JaneGoodall)(袁隆平钱学森)Onlyifwecanunderstandcanwecare.Onlyifwecarewillwehelp.Onlyifwehelpshallallthelifeishopeful.-----JaneGoodallPost-readingASTUDENTOFAFRICANWILDLIFE“JaneGoodallinmyeyes!”(100-120words)Whatimpressed/moved/struckyoumostaboutJaneGoodall?Thinking?Whatqualities?Whydo

2、youthinksheis…?JaneGoodallinmyeyeswillingtosacrificehard-workingmodestunselfishdevotedperseveringdeterminedintelligentresponsiblegreatwoman….kind,loving…brave…Post-readingAStudentofAfricanWildlifestudyobserverecorddiscoversayarguehelpsetupworkoutthinkaboutachieveinspire1.Janehasstudiedthesefam

3、iliesofchimpsformanyyearsand…isgoingtobeverytiredanddirty…2.Shespentyearsobservingandrecordingtheirdailyactivities.3.Sinceherchildhoodshehadwantedtowork….4.Itwasunusualforawomantoliveintheforest.Onlyafterhermothercametohelpherforthefirstfewmonthswassheallowedtobeginherproject.5.ForfortyyearsJa

4、neGoodallhasbeenoutspokenaboutmakingtherestoftheworldunderstandandrespectthelifeoftheseanimals.Shehasarguedthatwildanimalsshouldbeleftinthewildandnotusedforentertainmentoradvertisements.Shehashelpedtosetupspecialplaceswheretheycanlivesafely.6.“OnceIstop,itallcomescrowdinginandIremember.…thinka

5、bout…neverforget….(hardworking,determined)(devoted,persevering,hardworking)(haveadream,devoted)(brave,determined)(determined,devoted,loving)(loving)Sheisunselfish.Shechangedtheworldbyknowledge,understanding,perseveranceanddeepemotion.What’smore,Ithinksheisagreatwoman.WhenshefirstwenttoGonbein1

6、960,it’sunusualforawomantoliveinforest.Byhermanyyearsobservingshefindthechimpshowtocommunicatewitheachother.Shedevotedherlifetoanimals.Sheisasuccessfulwomen.Janestudiedchimpsbyobservingthemintheforest.Sheworkstoprotectchimpseverywhere.Shehelpedsetup…and…changedtheway…细节不能有效支撑qualityQuality不明确总

7、结的不是quality情感丰富的表达：First,Iadmireherforherdetermination.Justthedeterminationofstudyingchimpshelpedherovercomeallthedifficultiesintheforest.Nomatterhowtiredanddirty,she….Second,Iammovedbyherdeeploveforchimps.…Aboveall,Iappreciateherattitu