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1、M4U1-3写作(伟人生平)(JaneGoodall)(袁隆平钱学森)Onlyifwecanunderstandcanwecare.Onlyifwecarewillwehelp.Onlyifwehelpshallallthelifeishopeful.-----JaneGoodallPost-readingASTUDENTOFAFRICANWILDLIFE“JaneGoodallinmyeyes!”(100-120words)Whatimpressed/moved/struckyoumostaboutJaneGoodall?T
2、hinking?Whatqualities?Whydoyouthinksheis…?JaneGoodallinmyeyeswillingtosacrificehard-workingmodestunselfishdevotedperseveringdeterminedintelligentresponsiblegreatwoman….kind,loving…brave…Post-readingAStudentofAfricanWildlifestudyobserverecorddiscoversayarguehelpsetupw
3、orkoutthinkaboutachieveinspire1.Janehasstudiedthesefamiliesofchimpsformanyyearsand…isgoingtobeverytiredanddirty…2.Shespentyearsobservingandrecordingtheirdailyactivities.3.Sinceherchildhoodshehadwantedtowork….4.Itwasunusualforawomantoliveintheforest.Onlyafterhermother
4、cametohelpherforthefirstfewmonthswassheallowedtobeginherproject.5.ForfortyyearsJaneGoodallhasbeenoutspokenaboutmakingtherestoftheworldunderstandandrespectthelifeoftheseanimals.Shehasarguedthatwildanimalsshouldbeleftinthewildandnotusedforentertainmentoradvertisements.
5、Shehashelpedtosetupspecialplaceswheretheycanlivesafely.6.“OnceIstop,itallcomescrowdinginandIremember.…thinkabout…neverforget….(hardworking,determined)(devoted,persevering,hardworking)(haveadream,devoted)(brave,determined)(determined,devoted,loving)(loving)Sheisunself
6、ish.Shechangedtheworldbyknowledge,understanding,perseveranceanddeepemotion.What’smore,Ithinksheisagreatwoman.WhenshefirstwenttoGonbein1960,it’sunusualforawomantoliveinforest.Byhermanyyearsobservingshefindthechimpshowtocommunicatewitheachother.Shedevotedherlifetoanima
7、ls.Sheisasuccessfulwomen.Janestudiedchimpsbyobservingthemintheforest.Sheworkstoprotectchimpseverywhere.Shehelpedsetup…and…changedtheway…细节不能有效支撑qualityQuality不明确总结的不是quality情感丰富的表达:First,Iadmireherforherdetermination.Justthedeterminationofstudyingchimpshelpedheroverc
8、omeallthedifficultiesintheforest.Nomatterhowtiredanddirty,she….Second,Iammovedbyherdeeploveforchimps.…Aboveall,Iappreciateherattitu