高考英语书面表达 试题分析

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1、高考英语书面表达试题分析请根据所给材料、提纲以及要求写一篇英文稿件。背景材料：EnglishHorizons第25卷总228（5/2007）期编者按：本期刊出Lora的来信，欢迎读者就信中谈到的问题进行分析并提出建议。Deareditor.I’maseniorhighschoolstudent,andIwanttoworkpart-timethissummer.Ithinkitisgoodtodoso,butmyparentsdon’tagreewithmeIjustcan’tunderstandthemIneedyouradvice.Lora要求：1.短文须写在答题卡

2、的指定区域。2.短文词数不少于80（不含已写好的部分）。3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。4.书写须清晰、工整。提纲：第1段：Lora利用暑假打工的理由第2段：Lora父母不同意的理由第3段：你给Lora的具体建议试题结构输入过程输出情景描述写作要求内容构思：主题集中内容关联—覆盖所有内容要点。—应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。—语法结构或词汇方面只有少许错误。—有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。语言表达：意义明确句式准确连句成篇：结构衔接意义连贯文字具体内容图画写作提纲功能意念陈述/描述（事实/事件）观点看法自由发挥应用文举例学生作文分析Clothing’sU

3、sesThroughouttheword,clothinghasmanyuses.Itisusedtoprovideprotectionfromtheelements.Italsoisworntopreventothersfromseeingspecificpartsofone’sbody.Someclothingisworntoprovidesupernaturalprotection.Todayclothingisallkindsofdifferent.Mostofthemareverybeautiful.Womenlikebeautifulclothingandm

4、entoo.Peopleinallculturesuseclothingandotherformsofbodilydecorationtocommunicatestatus,intentionsandothermessages.Clothingisfaction.Differentpeoplelikedifferentclothing.Aclothinglikesapeople.Ithasdifferentadvantagesandthesamepeople.oneclothingcanpointoutonepeople’sadvantagesanddisadvanta

5、ges.Andwhentheweatherishot,wecanwearclothingwhichcanmakeusfeelcool.Whentheweatheriscold,itcanmakeusfeelwarm.Clothinghasmanyuses.Ilikeclothing!学生作文分析ClothingandStatus§ThedeepestimpressionTextAmakesonmeisthat:“Peopleinallculturesuseclothingandotherformsofbodilydecorationtocommunicatestatus

6、,intentionsandothermessages.”§Theauthortoldusthatthroughouttheworld,clothinghasmanyuses,butclothingalsostandforstatusandothermessages.§Thesedays,peoplewhodomanualworkoftenreceivefarmoremoneythanpeoplewhoworkinoffices.Peoplewhoworkinofficesoftencalled“white-collarworkers”,fortheyalwayswea

7、rwhitecollarandtietogotowork.Butmanypeoplearewillingtoworkinofficeinsteadofamanualworker.Why?Justforincreasingtheirsocialstatus.§Takeamanforexample,heworkedonthecompanyasacleaner.Peoplecalledhim“Bloggs”.Hissalarywashigherthananyotherwhitecollarworkers.Buthe,changedforajob