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1、这篇作文是针对TPO第四套的综合写作(关于恐龙是否是恒温动物)写的，虽然有一些小错误，但ETS评分为满分。　　SampleResponse　　Theprofessoractuallycontradictsthestatementsmadeinthepassage.Sheisoftheviewthatdinosaursarenotendothermsi.e.theywerenotabletokeeptheirbodytemperatureataconstantrate.　　Theprofessorcontradictstheissueofdinosaursbei

2、ngendothersbasedontheavailabilityoffossilsbeingavailableinthwepolarregions,shesaythatthepolarregionsinthosedayswerenotascoldastheyaretodayi.eatleastwarmenoughfordinosaurstolive.Durinharshwintersshesaysthatthereisapossibilityofthedinosaursactuallymigratingtowarmerregions.　　Theissueof

3、legpositionandmovementbeingusedasareasontoclasifythedinosaursasendothermsdoesnotpleasetheprofessoreither.Shesaysthatdinosaurshadlegsundertheirbodiestosupporttheirhugebodiesi.ethelegsunderthebodyofthedinosaurwereactuallytosupportthehugeweightofthedinosaurandnottoprovideitwithabodystr

4、ucturelikeendotherms(whichisactuallysuitedforrunning).　　Theprofessoracknowledgesthepresenceofhaversiancanalsbutalsopointsoutthatthatthefossilsshowthepresenceofgrowthrings.Theseringsoccurduetothethickeningofthebone.Thethickeningindicatesthatthedinosaurswere'ntactuallygrowingcontinuou

5、slybutwereexperiencingperiodsofrapidgrowthandperiodsofnogrowthinsuccesion.Thispattern.shesaysischaracteristicofnonendothermicaanimals.　　Thusitcanbeinferredthattheprofessorchallengesthepassagebygivingreasonsastowhyshethinksthatthedinosaurisnotanendotherm.　　DescriptionofResponse:　　Des

6、piteinitialappearances,thisresponselargelysucceedsinclearlyandaccuratelypresentinghowthelecturepointstakeissuewiththepointsinthereadingpassagethatdinosaurswereendotherms.Thefirstpointregardingdinosaursinpolarregionscouldbeabitclearer.Otherwise,theresponsemainlysuffersfromtypographic

7、alerrors,butthesearenotregardedasmajorproblems;itisobviousthatthewriterhasgoodcontrolofstructureandvocabularyandtheabilitytousethesetoconveyinanorganizedandlogicalmannerwhathasbeenunderstoodandasked.　　我们并不主张考生死记范文，考试时如果遇到类似题目照搬上去，这并不能考察考生的写作能力。新托福考试写作多背一些范文，可以积累一些素材，像好的短语、词、句等，灵活运用。

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