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1、好句：1．Hewenttohisneighbour’shouseasfastashecould.(郭诗琪)2．Hephoned“119”asfastashecould.(梁雁仙)3．Theneighbourandthefire-fighterswereverythankfultoJack.(恩裕)1．Jackfeltreallyhappybecausehecouldhelpedotherswhoneedshelp.(煜华)2．ThoughJackandhisneighbourwereverytired,theydidn’tgiveupputtingoutthefireanddid

2、everythingtheycouldtohelpthefirefighters.(婉颖)1．（Withoutthinkinganything）,herushedtothetelephoneatonceandcalled“119”forhelp.(梓宇)1．Henearlyjumpedoutofhisskin.(国华/笑华)2．WhatabraveboyJackis!(霍俊杰)改正错误：host—ownerstrongfire1．Thefirefighterssaid“whatahelpfulboyJackis!”2．Jackcalledthefirefighterbyphone

3、atonce3．Whenthefirefighterarrivedthehousewhichwasonfire,thefirehasbeenputout.afterthis,thehost……1．Heranandcallforhelptothefirefighterswithphone.2．Itwasalotofthickfirecomingoutofthehouse…..1．Hegotupatonceandphonecallthefirefightertocallforhelp.2．Jack’sneighbourwasthankshealot.3．Hisneighboursay

4、thankyoutohim.1．Jackwasatoncephonethefirefightertoaskforhelp.2．Thefirefighterweresaidtohim“Howkindofyou”3．“Howgoodaboy!”4．“Whatabravepeople!”1．Thefirewasburningseriously2．Intheend,thefirewasputout.BensaidtoJack“Thankyouforhelpmealot”thefirefightersaid“youaresuchacleverboy!”ButJackthought“Nots

5、aythanks,whatanunforgettabledayitis!”