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1、学生双语报。辅导测评周刊高三湖北专版第十期短文写作题目：近日《中国青年报》就“你是否支持严厉的家教”进行了问卷调查，其中55%的调查对象表示支持，他们认为严厉的家教是保证孩子成长的必要条件；45%的人表示反对，认为严厉的家教剥夺了孩子们的乐趣，给孩子太多的压力，不利于孩子们的成长。请你就此话题用英语写一篇文章，描述大家的观点，发表自己的意见。注意：1词数120左右2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯提示单词：调查对象respondent参考范文：Recently,asurveyon“Doyousupportstrictparenting?”wascarri

2、edoutbytheChinaYouthDaily.55%oftherespondentssupportstrictparenting,becausetheythinkitisnecessaryforparentstohelptheirchildrenfacethefiercecompetitionandputthemonthewaytotheirfuturesuccessthroughstrictparenting.However,45%areagainstit.Theythinkstrictparentingwilldeprivechildreno

3、ffunandbringthemtoomuchstress,whichisobviouslyharmfultothem.Inmyopinion,itisnecessaryforparentstobestrictwiththeirchildreninsomecases,becausechildrenarenotoldenoughtodistinguishbetweenrightandwrong.Manychildrenhavebeenspoiledorevenhavedonesomethingseriouslywrongbecauseofalackofs

4、trictparenting.Butparentsshouldcommunicatewiththeirchildrenequallyandgently.学生作文（张云）Recently,theChinaYouthDailyhasmadasurveyaboutthegiventopic“whetheryousupportthestrictparenting”.Butdifferentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.55%oftherespondentsholdasupportingattitudetowardsit.Theythi

5、nkthatstrictparentingisakeywhenchildrenaregrowing,whichcanhelpthemgrowhealthily,andsomeofthemsaidwhatchildrenneedisstrictparenting.But45%oftherespondentsholdtheviewthatstrictparentingisthatitnotagoodwaytobringupchildren.Whattheyconsideristhatitcanpreventchildrenfromlookingforthe

6、irinterest,Thechancesthatchildren'spressurewillincreasearethattheirparentsmaybetoostrictwiththem.Asweallknow,itisharmfultochildren'sgrowth,therefore,theydisagreeit.Inmyopinion,strictparentingisnecessary,butweshouldhavealimit好句子1TheChinaYouthDailyhasmadeasurveyaboutwhetheryousupp

7、ortstrictparentingornot.2Thereasonisthattheythinkstrictparentingisgoodforchildrendevelopment.3Thefactisthatitwilldeprivechildren'sinterestandchildrenwillbetiredofthislife.4AsfarasIamconcerned,strictparentingisnecessarytoeducatechildreneffectively.