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河南省襄城髙屮二六班2012.3-2012.4第一学期作业短文改错题22篇（附答案）一、DearSir,IwasgreatlyshockedasgoodasgrievedwhenIheardseveralareasinSichuanandotherprovinceshadstruckbyaterribleearthquake,andIreallywanttohelptheearthquakevictims.Aspsychologymajor,Iknowmanypeopleinthequakeaffectngareas,especiallychildrensuffermuchintheirhearts,orevenhavepsychologicalproblems.ButFdliketobeavolunteerpsychologistandhelptheyoungchildrenwithmyexpertknowledges.Ialsoknowthatthelong-termpsycologicaladviceonvitimsisadifficulttaskbutFmpreparedtomeetsomechallenge・Wouldyoubeaskindastogivemetwomonths，leave?Lookingforwardtoreceivingyourreply.二、IntheeveningofApril19th,LiHuawaswatchingTVwhilehismotherwasbusypreparingdinnerinkitchen.Howattentivehewaswatchingtheprogramwhiletelephonerang.Itwasfromafriendofhismother,whowantstosayHappyBirthdaytohismother.“Todayismymother^birthday?”LiHuathoughttoherself,feelashamed・Atthestory,Igotdeeplyshocked・Itwasnevereasyforparentstobringusup.Theygiveuslotsofloveandcare,andwedon^tcareforthemenough.Nowit，snevertoolatetorealizethisandtoshowourloveandcareforthem三、OnedayIboughtapairofleathershoesinashoeshop.Andasellertheretoldusthathewouldhave"threeguarantees^fortheshoes.Ilefttheshophappily.Butonlyfourdayslatertheshoeswerewomout.IwasveryangrythatIreturnedbacktotheshopwithouthesitation,hopingtogetbackmymoney.Itoldhimwhathadhappenedtomyshoes.BeforeheknewFdkepttheshoesforfourdays,herefusedto,whichmademesurprisedandpuzzled・Iaskedhimhowhedicingkeephispromise.Thesellersaid,"Doyouunderstandwhatthe'threeguarantees^means?Itmeantyoucarflreturnthemtogetyourmoneyifyou'vekeptthemmorethan3days：Whatafoolishbuttrickyexplanationtothe"threeguarantees^!四、Onesummer,alibrarywashavingtheterribleproblem・Ithadgrownsobigandhadtomovetoanewly—builtlibraryacrosstown・Everythingwasfinishedandpaid,onlytofindthattheyhadn'tleftenoughmoneytomovetheirmountainsofbooksacrosstown.Eventhecheapmovingcompanychargedtoomuch・Whatcouldtheydoabout?Finallyonecleverlibrarianhadanidea.Shesaidthatthemovewilltakeallsummerandduringthattimethelibrarywouldbeclosed.Whynottoaskeveryonetocomeintoborrowsomebooks?Attheendofthesummertheycouldretumittothelibrary・Theideasworkedbeautifullyandnotonlydoesthelibrarysavealotofmoney,butpeoplereadmanybooks.五、EducationforJapanesechildrenwasfreeforthefirstnineyearsandallchildrencangotoschoolforsixyearsofprimaryschoolingandthreeyearsofsecondschooling・Theattendanceareabout99.9percentofthetotalnumberofschool—agechildren.Schoolusuallyisbeginsat8o'clockinthemorningandendat3o'clockintheafternoononweekdaysandonnoononSaturdays・TheschoolyearbeginsinAprilorendsinMarch.ItisasummerholidayinAugustandawinterholidayduringtheNewYearseason.Afternineyearsofcompulsoryeducation,studentscanenterathree—yearhighschoolthroughpassinganexaminationandbypayingasmallchargeeachyea匚〕＜、Recently,ourschoolhasheldthemeaningfuldiscussiononifitisreasonableformiddleschoolstudentstohaveclassesonweekends.Someofourclassmatesbelieveweshouldhaveclasses onweekends,becausewecanmakefullyuseofthefreetimetoreviewthelessonswehadlearnt・Someothersareagainsttheopinion,sayingwehadbettertohaveagoodrestonweekendssothatwecanworkeffectiveduringtheweekdays.Therestagreewithneitheroftheopinion.Theyhavetheviewwhichkeepingabalancebetweenworkandplayisimportantforthem.Theysuggestonedayoftheweekendshouldbeusedtolearnourlessensandduringtheotherdaytheydosomethinginterestedorhavearest.七、Onedayatschool,Johnkissedagirlinhisclassonthecheek・Ateachersawitandtellingittotheheadmaster,whothoughtJohnshouldbepunished.Johntoldtostayattheheadmaster^officelonely.John'smotherwasveryangrywhilesheknewit.Shewantedtheheadmastertotellherhowtheschoolpunishedhersonforkissingothersix-year-old,"Thegirlaskedhimtokissorhedidthisonlytoshowfriendship.What'swrongwiththatone?"Shesaid.Theheadmasterthoughtaboykissedagirlwaswrongevenifhewasonlysixyearsold.TTsunwelcomebehavioraccordingtothestudenthandbook二theheadmastersays.八、DearSirPmLiHuafromJinaruWhenreadinganadvertisement,Iamgreatlyimpressedwiththeaimofthisactivity.Ithinkitinstructivelytolearntolivetogethe匚Ifsagoodopportunityforonlychildrenlearntosharewithandworktogether.Therefore,Irecommendmyselftoyou.Beaboyof17.1amoutgoing,goodatEnglishandhaveexperienceofworkingwithchildrenagingfrom7to12.1thinkit'sakindofwin-winactivity.Foronething,Icanhelptakecareaboutthechildren.Forother,IcanimprovemyEnglish,makemostfriends,andenrichmylifethroughit.I'mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.九、Oneafternoonafter1wasinmywayhomeafterschool,theweatherchangedsuddenly-Darkcloudsweregathered.IbegantofeelworriedbecauseIdicinghaveneitheraraincoatoranumbrellaaboutme.Itsoonstartedtorainheavy.Justas1washurryinghome,Iheardsomeonecallingmefrombehind.IturnedtohavelookandfoundthatitisCharlie,awarm・heaitedneighborofmine.Heimmediatelyofferedtosharehisumbrellawithmine.Wewalkedallthewayshome,chattingorlaughing・IfithasnotbeenforCharlie'shelp,Iwouldhavegotwettotheskin.Howmuchgrateful1wasforhishelp!十.Lastmonth,weallfeltsorrytohearthatMrsLiuwasill.Afterwards,wehadthediscussionanddecidedtomanageofourown.Duringthefollowingdays,neitherofuswaslateforschool.Inclass,welistenedtotheteachersattentively.Besides,wewintheschoolbasketballmatch.Thedaybeforeourteachercomesback,wegavetheclassroomathoroughlycleaningtowelcomehe匚Ourmonitorpresentedabunchofflowerstoher.SeetheredflagfortheWeeklyModelClass.MrsLiuwashappyandbemoved・Weweregreatlyinspiredeitherbecausewesucceededinmanagingbyourselves,whichprovedwehadgrown・H—>DearLucy,Fmgladtohearofyou.I'msorrytohearthatyoudicingpassmid-termexamination.Thoughyoudidn'tpasstheexamtwomonthsago,butyoushouldhaveconfidenceinyourselfandfeelrelaxedsothatyoucandobestinthecomingexams・Thereasonyoufeelsotiredtostudymaybebecauseyouaren'tconfident.Howyoumustdonowisorganizeyourtimewell.Don'tworktoolatelyortoohard.Youcanalsotalktoyourclassmateaboutyourworries.Fmsuretheytewillingtohelpyou whateverbusytheyare.Fmlookingforwardtoyourgoodnewsandwishyousuccess・Editor十二、Itwasalongtimebeforewelastsaweachother.YoucanhardlyimaginehowImissyou.Howareyougettingwithyourfirstjob?IrememberyouoncetellmeyouwereeagertograduateandbecomeanEnglishteacher.Nowthatyoumusthavemanyfirsthandexperience.HowdoyoufindyourEnglishteaching?IsteachingkidsEnglishasinterestedasyouexpectedincollege?Anddoyourstudentenjoyyourclassroomteaching?Anyway,Ibelieveyoumustbeverypopularwiththekids,foryouareabornteache匚Hopeyougreatsuccessinyourwork!Yes,whynotgivemecallorcomeforaget-togetherinthisweekend?十三DearCasey,Youaskedinyourlastletteraboutmysparetimeactivities.Well,Ilikemuchmorethanone,suchaspaintingandmodlemaking,somyfavouriteisdancing.IstartedwhenIwas8yearold,anditwasagreatfun!Dancingwasnotdifficult・Ifyouwanttodoitgood,youneedtofindagooddancingteacherandtakinglessonsregularly.That'sIdidand1alsohadtotakeexamseverysixmonths.Now,Fvestoppedgotolessons.Isometimestakepartinperformancesatyourschool,whichIreallyenjoyverymuch.Regards十四、DearMrLiu,Fmwritingtotellyouwhatdowethinkaboutyourteachinginourclass.Allofwestudentsthinkhighlyofyourwayofteaching,asyoucanalwaysmakeyourclassesliveandinteresting.Inaddition,youTesuchthelearnedmanthatwecanlearnalotfromyou.Franklyspeaking,youhavebuiltupconfidenceoftearningEnglish.ButbeingstillpoorinEnglish,someofusstillneededyourhelp・Thatweneedisthatyoucanspeakalittlemoreslowlysuchthatwecanunderstandyouwell.Besides,wouldyouliketospendmoretimewithusandtakepartinourafter-schoolactivitytogiveusmorechancespracticeourspokenEnglish?YoursLiMing十五、DearEditor,Igraduatedthisyearandwantedtogetjob.IthoughtthatitwouldbesuccessfubbuteventuallyIfailed.ThatwaswhyIwassolazythatIdidn'twanttogoout.Ialwaysblamedforthehotweather.Andtherewasanotherreasonnobodyknowabout.Iregardedmyselfassomeonewhocouldn'tdoanythinglonely.Ioftenfeltlittlecapablethanothers.WhenIfoundacompanywasadvertising,Iwasevenafraidtocalltoasktodetails.Iwantedtomakeamove,and1wasalwaysdisappointed.WhatshouldIdo?Fmlookingforwardtoreceiveyourreply.十六、DearManager,Fmwritingtoexpressmythanktoyouandyouremployer.MissLiwhohelpedmefoundmyhandbagwhileIwasshoppinginyourshoponMarch24.ThatdayIwasgreatlyinterestingandlostmeinenjoyingbeautifulhandiwork・AfterIpaidforapairofsilksocks,Ileftmyhandbagonacounte匚IhavealreadywalkedoutoftheshopthenMissLicameupwithmyhandbag.Ithanked herandofferedherarewardof20dollars,andsherefusedtotakeevenacent.Iwasdeepmovedbyherspirit.MissLi'sgoodqualitiesaresomethingFllalwayskeepmind.十七、Mydreamistobecometeache匚Idreamofthatstandingontheplatformintheclassroomandgivinglessonstolovelyboysandgirls.Iteachthem,playwiththemorwatchthemgrowingup.IalwaysfeelyoungsoIamstayingwiththem・Iknowthatisnoteasytobeateacher.Ihavetolearninordertoteach.Withoutenoughknowledges,Icanneverteachwell・Whatwasmore,Ihavetomakefriendswithmypupilsandtakecareofthem.OnlybythiswaycanIbeagoodteacherandwinrespectfromthem.Therefore,nowasastudent,Ishouldworkveryhardlytomakemydreamcomingtrue.十八、短文改错（满分10分）AfterIfinishedtheschoolthisyear,Ibegantolookforawork.Nowseveralmonthslater,IstilldicingfindajobthatIwasinterested・LastSundaymorningIreceivedaphonecallfromamancallinghimMr.Smith・Hesaidtomeonthephone,UIhearthatyoudoverywellinyourstudies.Imayhaveajobforyou/Ienteredhisofficewithabeatenheart・HowIhopedthatIwillgothroughthejob・huntingtalktodayandhewouldtakemeonlikealabassistant.Buttomysurprised,whathesaiddisappointing.Heonlyneededamodel.Asstudents,wehaveclassfromearlymorningtilllateafternoon-Therefore,takeaten-minutebreakbetweenclasseswasdefinitelyimportant,evennecessary.Otherwisewemayfeelbothphysicallyormentallytired・Duringtheten-minutebreakwedosomethingtogetridtiredness.Thatweneedistohavearealrestjnsteadofgettingevenmoretired.Sodon'tdoanythingthatwhatwillmakeyoutooexcited.Myten-minutebreakisalwayspleased.Iusuallydosomesimpleexercises.SometimeIhaveafreechatwithmyclassmatesorjusttakeawalkduringthebreak.Whenthenewclassbegins,youfeelfreshagain.20.Nowadays,moreandmorestudentsareputtingglasses.Itisdueto,Ibelieve,badhabitswehaveformedatschoolandathome.Ontheonehand,theydonrtkeepbooksfarenoughfromtheirfacesunlesstheyarereading.Theyalsospendmuchtootimereadingorwritingwithoutrest.Ontheotherhand,theyarenlcarefullyenoughaboutprotectingtheireyesathome・SometimestheygetabsorbingincomputergamesorTVprograms,ignoringtheradiationthatcamefromTVsorthecomputers.Readingwhilelyingonthebedisalsothebadhabitespeciallywhenthelighttheyreadisn'tbrightenough.Goodeyesightisnecessaryforagoodlife,butpleaseprotectyoureyes!短文改错一Answer:1.good—well2.had后加been3.As后加a4.affecting—affected5.or—and6But一So7.knowledges一knowledge8・on一for9・some一anylO.askind一sokind短文改错二Answer:1.In—On2.inkitchen—inthekichen3・attentive—attentively4.mother—mother's5.wants—wanted6・herself—himself7.feel—feeling8.was—is9.and一but10.and后的to去掉短文改错三Answer:l.aseller—theseller2.us一me3.veiy—so4.back去掉5.Before一After 6.refusedto—refused7・how—why8.meant—mean9・money—back10.buttricky—andtricky短文改错四Answer:l.the—a2.so—too3.paid后加for4.cheap—heapest5.doabout—o6.will—would7.not后的lo去掉8.returnit一returnthem9.ideas一idea10.does—id短文改错五Answer:1.was—is2.can—must3・second—secondary4.are—is5.usually后is去掉6.end—nds7.onnoon—atnoon8.or—and9.It—There10.through一by短文改错六Answer:1.heldthe一helda2.if—whether3.fully一full4.hadlearnt一havelearnt5.better丿X白＜Jto去掉6.effective—ffectively7.opinion—pinions8・which——that9.them——us10・interested——interesting短文改错七Answer:l.inhisclass—inclass2.telling—tell3.told前加was4.lonely—alone5.while一when6.how一why7.other—another8.thatone一that9.kissed一kissing10.says一said短文改错八Answer:l.an—the2.am—was3.instructively—instructive4.children后加to5.share后去扌卓with6Be—Being7.aging—aged8.takecareabout—takecareof9.other—another10.most——more短文改错九Answer:1.in一on2.were去掉3.neither—ither4.heavy一heavily5.havelook一havealook6.itis—itwas7.mine一me8.or—and9.has—had10.much去掉短文改辛昔十Answer:1.hadthe—hada2.ofourown—nourown3.neither—none4.win一won5.comes—came6.thoroughly一thorough7.See—Seeing&be去掉9.either—too10.grown后加up短文改错Answer:1.of—from2.pass后加the3.but去掉4.best—better5.so—too6.because一that7.How—What&lately—late9.classmate—lassmates10.whatever—however短文改错十二Answer:1.before—since2.getting后加on3・tell一told4.Now后去掉that5.many——much6.interested——interesting7・student——students8.Hope——Wish9.me后力IIa10•去掉in短文改错十三Answer:1.much去掉2.so—but3.year—years4.was后面的a去掉5.Dancing后的was改成is6.good一well7.taking一take&That's后加what9.go一going10.your一our短文改错十四Answer:1do去掉2.we—us3.live—lively4.suchthe—sucha5.confidenceof—confidencein6・needed一need7.That一What8.suchthat一sothat9.activity一activities10.chances后力Hto短文改错十五Answer:1.get后加a2.it—I3.why—because4.blamed后去掉for5.know—knew6.lonely—alone7.little—less8.askto—askfor9.and——but10.receive一receiving短文改错十六Answer:Lthank—thanks2.found—find3.interesting—interested4.me—myself 5.onacounter—nthecounter6・have—had7.then—when8.and一but9.deep—deeply10.keep后加in短文改错十七Answer:1.become后加a2.dreamof后去掉that3.or—and4.so—while5.that后力Uit6.knowledges—knowledge7.was—is8・by—in9.hardly—hard10.coming—ome短文改错十八Answer:1.theschool中的the去掉2.work—job3.interested后加in4.him一himself5・d—did6・beaten—beating7.will一would8.like一as9・suiprised一surprise10.said后加was短文改错十九Answer:1.class—lasses2.take一taking3.was—is4.or—and5.rid后加of6.Thatweneed—Whatweneed7.that后面的what去掉8.pleased—pleasing/pleasant9.exercises—xercise10.you——I短文改错二十Answer:1.putting—wearing2.we—they3・unless—when4.too去掉5.carefully—careful6.absorbing—absorbed7.came—comes8.thebad—abad9.ready后力Uby/in/uncler10.but——so
