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英语作文如何得高分我们经常犯的错误:1.写作强调的是内容连贯，句子通顺，语言流畅，并且句子与句子之间能够用恰当的关联词衔接起来，并不要求写出多复杂的句子。但有些考生理解为只有句子长了，所用的从句多了才更纯正，所以使用各种从句分词等，致使文章言不达意，错误百出，效果适得其反2.语法不正确。语法包括两个方面，一是词法，二是句法。词法方面主要检查时态、语态、主谓一致、冠词、名词单复数和词语搭配等。句法方面主要检查是否使用一些熟悉句型，特别是尽力使用简单句这一原则贯彻得如何。语法错误主要有:句子错误:句子没有主语;句子没有谓语;乱用be动词;句句之间没有连接词.原因:基本句法即S+V没有搞清楚.词序错误:修饰语错位。例如：Heverylikesdancing.时态错误:动词时态的错误是高考英语书面表达中最常见的错误之一,也是考生运用语言的能力的显著标志之一。如2002关于公园收不收门票的讨论的介绍，陈述讨论的语句通常用一般现在时：Sixtyofthestudentsofourschoolthinkitisunnecessarytochargeanentrancefee.Theythinkthat……不少考生表达为Somepeoplethoughtthat……6高考资源网2006精品资料系列 自编英语:常常发生在主句写完以后，又想加些补充说明例如：Therearemanywaystoknowthesociety.ForexamplebyTV,radio,newspaperandsoon内容表达错误这种错误一般说来是审题不清所致。如2003年的书面表达，正确内容是：I’vefoundaflatforyou.It’sasmalloneof25squaremeterswithabedroom,abathroomandakitchen.ThehouseisnearNo11busstoponFangCaoStreetandtheschoolisatthenextstop.有不少考生表达为:“I’vefoundaflatof25squarekilometers.It’sinNo.11FangCaoStreet.”句句间缺少衔接过渡不平稳Heworkedhard.Hefailedtheexam.(Heworkedhard.However,hefailedtheexam.)习惯用语使用错误inmysparetime表达成atmysparetime;loseheart表达为losehisheart单词运用错误写作中常见考生因分不清单词的词性而产生错误。大致有：a.将vi.用成vt.如:comethecity/returntheplaceb.将adj.用成vt.如:Pleasepresentontime.Don’tabsent!c.将u.n.用成c.n.如:agoodnews/manyinformations6高考资源网2006精品资料系列 d.将adj./adv.使用错误.如:intherecentlyyears/studyhardly;e.将prep.用成v.如:Manyoverpassesaroundedthecity.Theroadthroughedthecity.f.将名词的单/复数使用不当。如：Therearelotsofhighbuilding.//Mostofthepeoplehaveprivatecar.句中building应改为buildings；句中car应改为cars。g.句子的主谓不一致:如:Alargenumberofbeautifulbuildingshasbeenbuilt.句中has应改正为have。h.常用词拼写错误:如:beautiful写成beautful;believe写成belive;money写成moneny…i.在叙事文中通常会运用一般过去时态,所以就出现了动词的过去式,尤其是不规则动词的过去式的拼写错误很普遍的现象。如：visitted/hurted/writed/….j.不定冠词的使用错误:如:sendae-mailtoyou(an)/Evenaoverpasshasbeenbuilt…(an)/Hegraduatedfromanuniversity.(a)k.虚词错误：①冠词的漏用和误用,如：Myfatherisworker.②缺必要的连结词或连结词多余,如：Helikesswimming,Ilikeclimbing.不间断句子，即几个句子连在一起，看起来似乎是一个句子Therearemanywayswegettoknowtheoutsideworld.先看一下要求:下面我们来看一下如何做6高考资源网2006精品资料系列 1.掌握基本句法.<理论是理论,实践最重要>2.掌握基本词法同上3.使用高级词汇和高级句式高级词汇供参考表并列补充关系的:whatismore,besides,also,aswell,moreover,furthermore,inaddition,表转折对比关系的:but,however,yet,instead,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary,although,differentfrom,incontrastto,despite,inspiteof,whereas,unlike,nevertheless,notonly…butalso,here…there,yearsago…today,this…that,theformer…thelatter,then…now,thefirst…whereasthesecond,once…now,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand,some…others,表因果关系的:since,as,because(of),for,so,thus,therefore,asaresult,sothat,表条件关系的:if,onthecondition(that),aslongas,unless,orelse,表时间关系的:when,after,before,until,assoonas,later,afterwards,soon,lately,recently,since,fromthenon,eventually,inthemeantime,then,suddenly,atthesametime,next,earlythismorning/year/century,afteraninterval,now,after,presently,later,afterward,somewhatlater,finally,atlast,allofasudden,表特定的顺序关系:aboveall,firstofall,firstly,first,secondly,the,next,finally,intheend,atlast,6高考资源网2006精品资料系列 表换一种方式表达:inotherwords,thatistosay,toputitanotherway,表进行举例说明:forinstance,forexample,like,suchas,表陈述事实:infact,actually,asamatteroffact,totellyouthetruth表总结:onthewhole,inshort,allinall,general,inaword,inconclusion,inclosing,insummary.第五档（很好）：1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.覆盖所有的内容要点。3.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。5.能有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。本文将探讨345先看一个2006年高考英语作文范例全国一Thankyouforyourlastletteraskingaboutourlibrary.(使用非谓语动词)Ourlibraryisthecenteroftheschool.Thereisabeautifulgardeninfrontofitand(and连接句子)ourclassroombuildingisright(使用适当的副词)behindit.Thelibraryisbig.Whenyougetinside(使用从句),youwillseemanyshelvesfullofbooks(使用形容词短语作定语)ondifferentsubjects.Therearealsolotsofnewspapersandmagazines.Weborrowbooksanddosomereadinginthelibrary.Accordingto(高级词汇)the6高考资源网2006精品资料系列 rule,everystudentcanborrowupto(高级词汇)5bookseachtimeandkeepthemfor10days.Itisopenfrom9amto7pmfromMondaytoFridayandclosedonweekends.Wealllikeourlibraryverymuch.(收尾)湖南Ofallmyteachers,Mr.Mooreistheonewhoimpressesmemost(使用从句).Thoughheis34(使用从句),helooksveryyoungforhisage(高级词汇).Andhe’soneofthemostpopularteachersinourschool.Comparedwithotherteachers(高级词汇),Mr.Moorepaysmoreattentiontohiswayofteaching.Hetriesvariouswaystomakehisclasseslivelyandinteresting(使用非谓语动词).Inhisopinion,weshouldnotonlyknow“what”,butalsounderstand“why”.So,insteadof(高级词汇)givingusanswersimmediately,heencouragesustothinkbyourselveswheneverheputsforwardquestions(使用从句).Withhishelp,we’velearnedhowtoanalyzeandsettleproblem.Whatawonderfulworldof“why”heleadsusto!(高级句式)Heissuchalearnedpersonthatwealladmirehemverymuch.(收尾)浙江卷Someofusthinkthatitisbettertoseethefilmthantoreadthebook(使用非谓语动词)intheoriginal.Thereasonisthatittakeslesstimetounderstandthewholestory(高级句式).Besides(高级词汇),the6高考资源网2006精品资料系列 filmisusuallymoreinteresting,anditiseasiertofollow(使用非谓语动词).Someothershavejusttheoppositeopinion.Theythinkthattheycangetmoredetailedinformation(高级词汇)fromtheoriginal.Meanwhile(高级词汇),thelanguageinthebookispossiblymorelivelyandbeautiful.Personally(高级词汇),Iagreewiththesecondview.ActuallyIhavemorereasonsforit.IthinkIcanstayathome,readingquietly(使用非谓语动词)inasituationofmyown,andwhat’smore(高级词汇),Iamabletobetterunderstandtheauthor’sideas.naword(高级词汇),toreadtheoriginalworkisbetterthantoseethefilmbasedonit.(高级句式)等等。总之，一句话：Practicemakeperfect!6高考资源网2006精品资料系列
