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1、新材料作文---概括指导HowtowriteasummaryofnarrationLearningaim:TofurthermasterthemethodsandskillsofwritingsummariesofnarrativepassagesDifficultpoint:Howtowriteanexactsummarywithoutleavingoutkeypoints学生习作常见错误：概括内容要点不完整使用太多细节内容而不是用概括的语言过多引用原文词句词数过多用第一人称而不是第三人称转述时态错误LastSundayI
2、wentfishing.Aftersettingupmyfishingrodwithbait,Isatdownonthebankofthelake.Buttwohourslater,Ididn’tcatchanyfish.Igotveryangryandbegantopackupmystuff,preparingtogobackhome.Justthen,Isawanoldmansittingnearme.Tomysurprise,hisbasketwasfulloffish,soIwentovertohim,wanting
3、toknowwhy.“Excuseme,buthowlonghaveyousathere?”Iasked.“Aboutfourhours,”heanswered.“Fourhours?”Icouldn’tbelievemyears.“Yes.It’sveryimportanttobepatient,”theoldmansaid.“Don’tconsiderfishingatiringsport.Justenjoyit.”Suddenly,Iunderstoodwhathesaid.Imustlearntobepatient.
4、ThenIsatthereandwaitedforfishpatiently.Ifeltafishtouchthebait,butIdidn’tmoveandwaitedfortherightmomenttoreelitin.Atlast,Icaughtit.Thismademeveryhappy.Inthefollowingsixhours,Icaughtover10fish.Onmywayhome,Ithoughtwhathadhappenedonthebank.Igraduallyrealizedthatthesecr
5、etofsuccesswaspatience.学生习作常见错误1:ThepassagetellsusthatlastSundayamanwentfishingbuthedidn’tcatchanyfishintwohours.Atthistimehesawanoldmansittingnearhim.Themanaskedthemanhowtocatchfishes.Theoldmansaidthatyoushouldbepatient.使用太多细节，语言不够概括概括内容要点：精，准，全学生习作常见错误2:Thestorym
6、ainlytellsusthatthewriterwasfishinganddidn’tcatchanyfish.Whenhepreparedtogobackhome,hefoundanoldmansittingthereandhisbasketwasfulloffish.Intheend,hecaughtmanyfish.引用原文词句不得直接引用原文的句子学生习作常见错误3:Thestorymainlytellsusthatthewriterwasfishingbutmadenoachievementsandprepare
7、dtogobackhome.Whileanoldmanwhosebasketwasfulloffishtoldhimthatfishisveryimportanttobepatient.Theauthorlearnedtobepatient.Atlast,theauthorcaughtfishandrealizedthesecretofsuccesswaspatience.(共60词)词数过多词数:约30词（小于20词或大于40词，扣2分）学生习作常见错误4:Thewritertellsusthathewentfishing
8、butdidn’tcatchanyfishafterwaiting2hours.Thenanoldmansittingnearmetoldmehissecretoffishingwaspatience.Finallythewritersucceeded.人称用错，应该用第三人称一般以第三人
